i didn't think their would be well written stories about Phantom brave but here it is a VERY well written story

kyaaa~! this fic is so sweet xD

OMG YES YES YES YES YES YES! I love it! so much! YEs! Pie upon pie upon pie upon a gazillion thumbs up to you! Thank you so much for a wonderful story!

This is old as hell, so probably no one will read this, but where did you get that ash couldn't feel? was it something only in the japanese version? or just something i don't remember?

She'd be eighteen not sixteen, she was thirteen at the beginning of the game. But this was a very good story so kudos!

This was freaking stunning and beautiful. I love it to pieces! I don't know what City of Angels is so WOOHOO! AND I LOVE STUFF LIKE THIS. I'm a sucker for romance and you just gave me my daily fixing of fluff.

Great work~!

Thank you for a good story that did not give me a coma. :D

Seriously, I was waiting for this couple to have a good get together at the end BUT NOOO! They just looked like best friends, bro and sis. Thanks you.

And I don't know what City of Angels is, so you're safe. FOR NOW...

...I totally didn't know her friend could walk yet...i didn't know who the final boss was ether...but eh i'll let you have it it was good. lol

OMG ILY XDD I was laughing when he was coming back to life though. Just the wording and the fact he got himself smacked in the head, I don't know I'm a bit of a saddist.

"Ash's head collided with the beam. He hit it with such force, he teetered and, in a daze, toppled down the stairs to land on his back. Thankfully some-what cushioned by the hearth rug. He blinked the moisture from his eyes before releasing himself to the darkness that threatened to take his vision.

Finally. Ash'd been gifted the death he'd so desperately asked for. So he thought."

Thank you so much again for the read D

I love romance stories like this :3 3 so thank you for putting on just the sorta thing I was looking for! It said on wiki that Marona was 13, and so I thought she would be 18 here, and gosh that confused me. But still, we don't know the official ages right o-o... or did I miss something? Thanks for the good read D

THAT. WAS. SO. CUTE. I'm gonna go read it a couple thousand times again _

W-wow. That was...great!

I really enjoyed it~!

XD Had tears in my eyes at the end~

XD Over-exposure of fluff and cliché-ness won't put you in a coma...XD it's good for the soul! Lolol.

tyhat was nice but i have to go take my medicen or il puck lol j/k it was a little fluffy but what made him alive again what if marona used revive on ash lol

yea hes svrewed

Woah...Good Story! I love did a good job...A very good I haven't beat the game,so I shouldn't have read this..but oh well.I loved it,and that's what counts.

(( Truth is I'm not even fast the First Chapter 2 mission...but I am level 26 already.I do have the book,so oh well.))

ANyway...Great Story!