Lovely simply lovely please write more my dear.

:D

Yumichika was a shinigami to start with, so wouldn't he be a Vizard now? He might still be in there somewhere.

I admit I've never seen this pairing before, but Hisagi's attitude matches canon, and this is a good way to push someone over the edge in all kinds of ways. *claps*

Wow. what a cliff-hanger. I kinda really want to know what happens next. Are you ever going to continue this? I would love it if you did, it's such a good story :)

Wow, this is amazing. I can just feel all of Shuuhei's emotions oozing out of the screen. Just saying. And I really love how you tied his situation, his musings, his relationship together with Tousen. Really amazing fic. Thank you for sharing this awesome fic.

The Shuu/Yumi pairing has never appealed to me, but it does after reading this fic! Amazing!

Pretty-Please do a sequel! Sorry to be so rude, but I can't help myself, it's such a great fic!

Wow...this is one of the best Hisagi stories I have ever read! It is compelling and unique. I know this was written quite a while ago, but the emotions and the characters keep it contemporary..LOL the speed at which Kubo is laying it all out, this scene probably was only a few months ago...hehe.

You write wonderfully...great job!

Wow, if anything was worthy of a follow up, this certainly is. I was so hoping for Hisagi to have a happy ending, but in the end, I cried at his loss. Again. He can't see to catch a break from Aizen. That's how I see this, Aizen is the cause of all his troubles. Losing his classmates, losing his captain, losing his lover. I really do hope you have continued writing. I found this completely by accident and I'm glad I had the chance to read it. Thank you so much for sharing.

This was...very amazing. I am so glad I decided to read it.

great story love hisagi stories there aren't enough of them so please write more if you like :)

This was f*ucking beautiful. I cried. I really did.

This is the saddest and best story I've ever read about Shuuhei And I am grateful for that.

omg...this is so nice and so sad...i love it! please tell me there's a sequel!

...I am speechless. That was amazing. There will be more? Soon? Please?

No, really, I am stunned. I loved it, adored it. Will, possibly, enshrine it.

Beautiful and awe inspiring.

Well-written. Good job. :)

i know this is a long time off, but great story! i hate the hisagi/yumi pairring with a passion, but i will say this was a great story, very well written, and, above all else, beautiful description. i still hate the pairring, but it put a great twist to the story! i loved all the sadness and stuff, im a real loser for sob stories, so it was probably one of the best ones ive read! gawh i just go on and on... anyways! i love the story, even if i hate the pairring... ironic, isnt it?