This is very well written.

Another excellent story! Sorry, rather burning through your writing. I really adore the number motifs, and the whole background with Axel in Twilight Town. Very good!

Beautiful, just beautiful. You have a remarkable talent with language. You know just when to sneak in a simile and can always pick the right one. Your characterization is remarkable. You consistently display an unmatched understanding of the characters, their similarity and differences. You write what I think might have really happened in the canon. Phenomenal.

Even 'tho this story is almost 3 years old, I'm in love with it!

It's truly a beautifully written story. Quite sad, actually, but amazing ..

Also, the use of numbers makes it really special.

wow that was a really good story, meloncholy but really good i enjoyed reading it!

“You just make serving you sound really good.”

That made me laugh.

I like the parts in parethesis and the jade king story.

"and then Zexion promptly kicks him in the face."

That was awesome.

That was... wow.

Just... wow.

It made me think and it was funny in a notfunny way if that makes sense and no I cannot be coherent because I want to read it again but I have to review now or I never will and I CANNOT NOT REVIEW THIS.

No matter HOW old it is XD

Beautiful.

BV

I actually found that rather incredible. I'm not sure what it was, exactly... I like your style, a lot. Wonderful. [:

aww, that was good. but strangely it left me feeling, just a bit sad.

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this before...

It's insanely brilliant, one of my favourite fics ever. I've read it what feels like a hundred times and yet I've yet to get bored of it. I love the intersection of numbers and your imagery that makes the gold light of Twilight just that little bit more painted, surreal.

Your characterization of Zexion and Axel is amazing. Iwish I could write half as well as you...

Faved, faved, faved a thousand times if I possibly could.

This was very different from some stuff I've read. Though it's really good. Nice job :)

I 'm finding it hard to explain why I liked this piece so much. It's poetic...in a good non-pretentious kind of way. It has an understated beauty that I really like- it's very introspective, but at the same time it doesn't get lost in itself.

Very good.

First off, ThANK YOU for the pairing. And I love what you've done with this- given a little twist to the setting with that hill on twilight. And the theme of 'information' getting as the link between the two of them. The scenes were wonderfully subtle and tactful, but still sensual and great to read. Good grasp of the characters- I liked the little details such as those with the kiss and the hair and how the get their Dusks. _ Wonderful fic!

That was totally wicked! Loved the writing style and lay of events. Interesting! Keep up the good work!

Wow, AxelxZexion! Hm.

That was great, really...um, thinking of the right adjective...'real'? I like that sort of style. :D