couldn't stop reading this...I kind of leaning towards more on the non-canon ships and like you my main ship will always be Jason/Trini and other than that I absolutely love the rest of pairings. I'm a big fan of your PR fics, I'm hoping you could write some more about them. Keep it up, you are an excellent writer!

couldn't stop reading this. Did I mention I love Tanya's lines? She really cracks me up! And btw I kind of leaning towards more on the non-canon ships, like you my main ship will always be Jason/Trini and I absolutely love the rest of the pairings too, not to mention I only read fics with a Jason/Trini pairing even though most of the fics I've read they're only the secondary protagonists next to T/K (which are most of the tims the main focus).

I'm a HUGE fan of your fics and I'm hoping you could write some more about them. Keep it up (which I can only hope because it seems that you're no longer active), but still you are an excellent writer!

oh my god...I'm literally rolling on the floor laughing right now...this chap is funny!

does this touch of love still exist? cause...I googled..and nada. and with my experience if Google cant find it , it ain't there .

ok I just have to put in my unsolicited two in good fun of course. ...and it's just a tiny observation...

totally respect that your main jam is jas/trini, respect you even more for still giving tomberly some spotlights here and there in spite of thatbut good lord; must we finally get to a shameless fluff /smut scene only to have even THAT revolve around Jason and trini?!

I love trini. as a character and the actress it's a damn shame she didnt get more time at centerstage..if that makes sense.

but dear God. Kim really went there? she made Tommy earn that panty drop like a 1950s preacher's daughter and finally she takes off the promise ring and climbs that sexy man like a tree and what does she do the entire scene?

trying to solve the mystery of trinis love life like it's the cure for cancer or who shot JFK or any of life's unanswered questions..bitch. trini getting some dick, she not even worried about her love life conundrum. damn sure ain't worried about yours, pollyanna. smh. poor Tommy. it seems like your girl really does love you like a brother and that breaks my soul into a million pieces.

your AU version of Kimberly really be throwing me off cause shes more like kat and less like Kim. albeit a kat like Kim is still way way better than kat. so carry on.

but for real, pretty sure the whole show never spoke about trini as much as Kimberly did while fucking Tommy for the first glorious time. lmao. kills me.

well this one is the trini kwan show. it is kinda crazy to me (and only in the ironic sense as the way you develop the story its totally believable) that we have on one hand Tommy and Kim who have a huge life altering romantic history and they dont even kiss (because Kim is an uptight prude here) and Jason and trini on the other hand whom have never been romantically attached and they're fucking like they're trying to break a world record lol...

no criticism to you as this is so well written and I'm enjoying your fics quite a bit; we just have a bit of a conflict in preference towards our fave couple. more over, I basically only care about tomberlyJason and trini are cute but I dont really care about any other characters. yet you do give Tommy and Kim enough air time to keep me interested which is a huge testament to your talent as a writer and also something I appreciate since I'm such a singularly loyal tomberly 're fantastic. I'm glad I stumbled across your fics

Hi! I'm pretty sure you are still around because i got an update message on one of your stories recently. That made me happy, because i do enjoy your work. Thank You for writing and sharing with us. I'm rereading this story, again, and it makes me remember why you are one of my favorites(though I'm unsure if I favorited you before, I'll be doing so with this review either way). All that said, and I know this is done and over with and you probably don't do this anymore, in this story, and probably it's contemporaries, you have some issues. The main one that's been bugging me on this reread is using won't when you should be using wouldn't. Also in this chapter you used the word tense in place of tension. Things like that.
It's not a huge deal, and I am in no way asking you to do anything, just pointing it out. While having it rewritten to fix these errors would be awesome, I understand it would be a HUGE undertaking and have no wish to make you feel that it's needed. Thank You for everything!

Im really enjoying this story.
I must say that the next chapter teaser (the firs one) was short but with only that make me want to read the next chapter.

Let me just say that this is one of my favorite fanfic story about Jason & Trini! I love how you actually make their roles mature. I only had 2hours of sleep coz I can't stop reading it. You are really good. I hope you won't get tired of writing stories specially about Jason & Trini. I am so in love with those two.

Almost had a heart attack when I couldn't find this story and thought it was taken down. I read the whole thing years ago (more than once as I recall), and I just couldn't get it out of my head today so I had to track it down. Looking forward to re-reading it, so glad it's still here. 3

Okay, I have to admit, I did the most RIDICULOUS doubletake/flail ever when I saw the update alert for this story in my inbox. You've been my favorite PR author ever since a good friend of mine linked me to "Keys to the Universe" a while back. I can't even tell you how many times I've reread this story, or Keys, or What Lurks Beneath, but I have to admit I thought you were done and there wouldn't ever be any new material. So... thank you so much for adding to this! You completely made my day! :D

aaahhhhh! I absolutely love love love this story! Please write more!

Rocky and Jason bids on when Tommy and Kim would sleep together was the best, but Adam adding his two cents was the icing on the cake :) lol.

Rocky's horrible cooking was a great touch!

haha! man oh man do I love your Rocky in this chapter! he's perfect 3 and Aisha. Yep that girl too!

Kim and Tommy's reactions to finding out about one another was priceless.

for some reason it wasn't letting me review the last couple of chapters..

now on with this. This story is just so fun! I don't think I've laughed this hard in so long! The possibility that the foyer in Jason's house doesn't have a light switch! Genius!

and at the end of the chapter with Billy and Trini's conversation was priceless. Billy- in Trini's words- is a smart boy for not taking that bet.