This is really good! Elisa does fall a lot, so it's very easy to see this from her pov

How have I never read your glorious Goliath/Elisa fics before today? :O They are SO GOOD. Thank you!

ENCORE!

I love how describe their understanding of each other. This was a great scene. I felt like I was watching an episode! Thanks for sharing!

I like. That relationship is as complicated as any and by no means can be rushed. You stayed very true to the characters as well. Good job.

Aw, I love these two. Great one-shot.

What a beautifully written story.

aww sweet the ending one word BUSTED

Nicely done. A neat, brief, but perfect little glimpse into this world.

Absolutely loved it! The end gave me a warm fluttery feeling!

There were a few hitches in punctuation that threw me off now and again, but I got the hang of it. This was a very nice illustration of the chemistry between them, most excellent. :) And, MY GOD, it was IN-CHARACTER! YAY! ;)

It's been about 10 years since I used to watch this show but this fic took me right back and reminded me how much I miss it. I loved the combo of action and sweetness, and you definitely captured how those two say so much with so little. I also love this line:

But then, anyone who'd ever been knocked off a skyscraper before Elisa had landed on the ground, and never told anyone anything again

This fic made my day.

Great story! I liked it a lot... ;0)))

Very nice and well written... romantic too.

I really like the beginning of this story, the descriptions of falling and the line about Elisa sharing a secret with the dead.