Reviews for Focus
cappy712 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
That was great! Loved the perspective of what was going through Dean's mind in the midst of that scene and the missing scene from the confrontation to the cabin.

Thank you for sharing!
Thorny Hedge chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
This is wonderful! How did I ever miss reading this gem?
Rachelly chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Hey Faye!

Another fantastic piece...this tag so needed to be in the eppy! Sammy was so hurt by the demon and to see your take on it was wonderful. Awesome limpness and great big brothering...So very believable. From Dean's focus to save Sam, to getting his Dad out of there, to fearing he'd almost lost both, to realizing in the rush, he hadn't really assessed Sam. Dean is spot on, as usual, and Sammy is adorably limp! Thanks for the fix! As always, your writing makes me squee!
TraSan chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Awesomeness!

I love angle you took on this. Dean's focus on his family.

The Hurt!Sam, of course, being a lovely bonus. :D
Poaetpainter chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Great little ficlet
Child of a Pineapple chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Oh...Dean...

And limp!Sam...

I loved it!
pwrhungryjr chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
Awesome!
Cupido chapter 1 . 11/21/2006
Loved it! Way too little Sam-hurt ín the season finale xD
Nana56 chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Excellent! Great job! I loved it! It fit perfectly into that missing area in DT.

Thank you!
Cassie chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
You are the queen of angst.
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
OH! The Sammy limpness, yes what it does to Dean, we just love :) Good stuff here :) Favorite part?

The closer and closer they got to finding this demon, the more alone he got, the more he lost of his brother and his father.

And their sense of fatalism didn’t help matters.

This wasn’t a fight his father expected to survive. This wasn’t a fight his brother intended to hold back from. This was the fight that they would both sacrifice themselves for, no questions asked.

At least no questions until the dust had settled and Dean found himself alone.
IMTheresa chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
I can't imagine the pressure Dean must feel being the one who has to take care of the family; he's been doing it his whole life but that can't be something you get used to.

Great job; I could really feel his pain and terror.
LoveJeter chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Great filler on the in between parts in the show! Very enjoyable read!
rozzy07 chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
Yay big thanks for filling in the worrisome and needling gap at the end of 'Devils trap' and what followed. Sam being pummelled literally senseless by the demon spawn from hell was too quickly glazed over in the finale. This one-off helps to give it the importance it deserved, exploring the viciousness of the attack and its subsequent impact perfectly. And yes Dean is an awesome older brother here.

Great stuff Faye. Perhaps even better if you took it off AU track and added more (hint, very big frigging hint) please!
Colby's girl chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Another great piece of writing. I felt the loneliness of Dean's situation even before the words were writen on the page stating just those very emotions. Good work!
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