| Reviews for To Mend a Broken Soul |
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   narusakufansforlife chapter 13 . 11/29/2017 Can't wait to read next one |
| jacpin2002 chapter 11 . 7/27/2017 I actually liked this story. Love my Gaasaku! |
| jacpin2002 chapter 8 . 7/27/2017 That was the most hot thing I have ever read. And who knew you could use sand like that! |
| cathern.cain chapter 13 . 11/1/2016 Slightly rough and jumpy in some parts but a very good story overall. Going on my list. |
| Fossette967 chapter 8 . 8/3/2015 Payback's a bitch |
| VampireKitty34 chapter 13 . 5/9/2015 I love this story! ! |
| Raine chapter 13 . 1/3/2015 Oh i don't know who is it.. but I think this story is One of the Best GaaSaku Fic that i've ever read.. I can't wait to read the sequel.. Sorry late tough, i'd just bumped to this story a while ago.. soo Keep Writing! :) Wish you all the best -Rei |
| muchaCC chapter 13 . 7/1/2014 I dont know word in english to describe this. It's ZAJEBISTE. Like awesome, but tenfold better. |
| Yannie chapter 12 . 4/24/2014 Hello I just finished reading your story. Your choice of words are awesome and I think you'd be a good writer someday. That is if you learn how to properly keep these characters 'in character' and also if you learn how to create a less-lousy and overly predictable plot. I honestly think you made Gaara (and Shukaku) so excessively sex-craved and OOC. As for Sakura, I don't think she's the type of girl who jumps at a person she barely even knew. Although I know the attraction is there, the way you portrayed their feelings was a little too rushed. The addition of Ajax and those other scenes made even it even lamer than it already is. This fic would appeal to GaaSaku fans who are craving for sexual interaction between these two characters, but for those who are looking for a great story with great characterization and intelligent plot, then I think this isn't the one. I don't write stories but I've read enough fics to know which one is awesome and which one is lame. I'm sorry for having to say this but I hope this will help you improve. Good luck and keep writing :) |
| Doom.Sammich chapter 1 . 11/9/2013 Did anyone else laugh at the nincompoops part?. I mean, NINcompoops. Nin. Compoops. Get it? Get it? XD I LOL'd at that like crazy... |
| LittleLadyGrey chapter 12 . 10/1/2013 Screw the unrecomended list! Loved this story and others and will be posting links to ur work on my fb page. Never stop writing yeah :) Julie. |
| waywardgal chapter 3 . 4/1/2013 Didn't feel like logging in, but that's my name. Ok first, you have a good writing style and your versions pf gaara and shukaku are great. Now for sakura, you're making her despicable. If she's the hero in this tale, we shouldn't hate her. For example, it is known that sakura is a suck up whose outwardly humble and respectful, and though her inner is a bit more honest, she would never outwardly insult an elder. That's just not her. Japanese culture is very respectful, especially towards the old. But you wrote ad if the story is in America. Which would have been ok had iy been u didnt plug in the random unnecessary japanese words. That being said, its good so far and im just going to pretend sakura hadn't been rude to the secretary. |
| leafstone chapter 13 . 3/3/2013 this is a great story so .where is the sequel at |
| Just A Fan chapter 11 . 2/17/2013 Omg. Ajax being gay was so unexpected! And him and Kankuro? Man, more unexpected! |
| Crimsonwolf1134 chapter 11 . 1/10/2013 This is a really good story. One of the few that is well-written. I really enjoyed it, thank you and keep it up. |
