You just killed Gibbs! OMG...
but I like your writing :)

GIBBS NO! I will not cry I will not cry I will not cry I will not cry T-T I cried. The damn... skunk.

The only reason why I don't like rule 50 is because you came up with it first...otherwise I love it! This story was great, sad, but well written. It should be left as is...great job.

Sigh.I'm sad but it's wonderful.

No! Gibbs!

I love it. wonderful stuff

love abs xox

i wont kill you but please continue

Aw. I like Rule 50. The last part totally suggested you would be continuting it? What hap?...If you werent "his eyes closed" would have been sufficient.

But I liked it. Nice writing.

No need to kill you, only one death is necessary for this fic ;)

Well done.

Just had to reply to this one.

Gibbs final words: "There's no justice, just us."

Could mean such a myriad of things, but what they meant to me was that his team was the last line of defence for just outcome, and never to give up, or stop believing in what they did. Maybe you meant something different by it, but I just thought I would pass on what it meant to me.

Don't feel crap about writing it. You should always write the ones that won't go away.

GOOD NOW PLEASE FINISH IT PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE?

ah!

i hate rule 50

i am off to read your other ncis they arent about rule 50

louise

This has the makings of a really good story. I hope you're going to continue it yes? With the team handling his death and finding out why this person did what he did? Maybe he was a hired gun or a sleeper agent. More!

Keeter

No killing here, I liked it. Thank you!