Another great fic! I just recently replayed these games /years/ later, so I'm in a bit of a Tak mood today, haha. Glad I found this story! I really like how you portray their friendship, and I loved the little insights into Tak's feelings about the Challenge. Nice touches of humor here and there, and the dialogue was perfect; I could hear all the characters' voices in my head while I read this.

who da hell is tak!

umm odd?sorry dont really get it. ok bye bye now

lol they are like siblings. really cool story too. the lobster scene is my fav too.

Ha ha! My favorite ones are the first one where Lok is jumping off the ledge, the fish one, the lobster one and the chicken one. UPDATE!

my favorite scene is when they both start rapping and Lok said "i never thought you were cool,i think we just bonded you want a hug? "no." "me neither so quit asking me!"

That was so cute!

ooh. very good. keep up the good work!