this was really good and I loved how you pointed out that there was no blood on Zuko's blades.

This was Amazing! .- Katara was spelled wrong but its still Awesome.

Awesome! what else can i say? this inner monologue foresees their later friendship perfectly.

Liked it.

Going to try to find the sequel...

This was an incredible story. I've recently found all these Zuko fans ranting and raving about 'Zuko Alnoe' but my fav episode is and probably always will be 'The Blue Spirit' (With the exception of 'Tale of Iroh', which wasn't a full episode) You've portrayed this episode extremely well. Did I mention EXTREMELY? And, what, 20 words with not a single line of dialogue? Truely an exquisite peice.

Is it meant to be a oneshot? Even if it is, it's wonderful. If it's not, please do keep up the great work.

Very good. The one thing is that you've misspelled Katara...no 'i'.

Hey great story please continue and update soon i thought it was cool that you used the time in between for Aang to think some things over.

Nice, this was very good! I like how you tell everything... is it a one shot or a long story? Anyway is very good so keep writing, Ill see if you have more works up here so I can read them! see ya

Good start, well done and post soon

Very good. I like it. Though I noticed a few things that can make it better. Its Katara, not Kitara. And don't write so much for the first chapter, space it out. Some people may not have time to read all of this in one sitting and will easily get bored and disinterested. Look at my stories, I don't write gigantic chapters, I leave the readers wanting more. I can't wait to read the next chapter. -Amy Michelle