Come on, you know you have like one more half-chapter on your computer somewhere, just give us our denouement. The work is amazing, and deserves to end with appropriate style. Your so close and it’s so good.
- S

Twelve years late though this review is, what a great story. There are a few plot holes but you have created an excellent work and universe here. I realize you may not be monitoring your ffn account and may feel the story fairly close to finished but I do hope that someday, rl etc allowing, you will bring this excellent piece to a close. Thanks very much for your hard work on it so far.

I am highly disappointed that this story wasn't finished. Given it was last updated in 2008... I doubt it will ever be, but dear gods this was a good story. Thank you for posting what you have/did for us to read and offer our feedback/thoughts on.

What a wonderful cliffhanger to not write for twelve years on. Please update.

It's been 13 long chapters and he's still confused. Please tell me that he's now decided that he's neutral? At least that will be a decision. And how can he not realise that dumbledore asked him out of a prophecy class. To discuss shit. He sabotaging his information. He could've told him that Lily made a mistake and regretted it thoroughly. But no. He lied, so how does Harry conclude that he isn't being lied to?

An excellent idea with a very nuce story. But it's too confusing. Harry has sooo many proofs that dumbles is being super weird, I think he's being in denial for toooo long over it.

is this the end? where is the sequel?
it's a beautiful story and you are a very talented author

Wow, this was really good! I have never read something quite like this. It shows how neutrality and pascifism is not lack of action or cowardice, but an active choice. Thank you for writing!

I wish there was more of this story. I would love to find out what happened with the Weasley's and if Harry ended up married like that game they played suggested he might and if he did, then to who. It doesn't tell us whether he's straight or not either. He didn't like Ginny and when questioned about a girlfriend or boyfriend by Hermione, he doesn't give much of a reason to which sex he preferred or if he liked both. I'm just extremely curious. And I definitely want to know what happens with the wand making apprenticeship.

This was an interesting story. I wish there was more to it!

I was wondering how anyone would get a swing on a porch, but you're writing in American, not English, aren't you? where a porch is a verandah, not what you'd call a stoop which is what a porch is in Britain

This is truly an amazing story!

HARRY BE DEM THUNDERBIRD

This is an interesting read.

Great story, very different. I'm sorry you never got round to finishing it.