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Man, that was sweet and beautiful LuNa writing there! And it's true, Luffy DOES pay attention to her and these two have a special bond between each other that if you look closely and well, it's not just nakama in the sense. Well currently it's all nakama but Luffy pays more attention to her than anyone else and Nami vice versa, when it does not concern money lol.

zoro always says..about time you two..and some other versions,,...hehe..nice fic

This is a good short story and i really liked how it was done. You didn't attempt to fill in every little detail which was a good thing.

After reading it i've tried puzzling over it for awhile and i'm very confused.

As far as i can all the feedback has been positve with encouragements for you to write more and yet this is your only story, why? did you get a new account or something, if so please tell me OR if not a reason as to why you aren't writing anymore.

too cute! Instant fav! Loved it! I also love to see more LuNa fics up here in ff.

That's gorgeously sweet. I especially like how Zoro is watching over them at the end xD

Aw so cute

Cool story..I cna't wait to see what happens next.

Update soon please!

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I still love it! Some sentences were a little confusing, but no problem if you finished late! I know how it is. Update soon! I want to read more and I might start watching One Piece even. I know the characters to try and follow, heh heh. I'll be waiting! ;D

i loved this fic

please make more LuNa fics

LuNa forever

aw! that was so cute! I love it! You should add on to it, it'd make a cute... I was going to say story...but it's already one! lol! I'm such a dork! HEHEHEHE

Hmhmhmhm... ok! first story? Great work! I mean... oh wait a sec, got to get a VERY bad picture out of my head! -pauses a moment- Ah... now it's gone! Well... I am not really a good 'helper' when it comes to stories... but you got the characters relatively right, and I loved the little thing at the end when Zoro thought, about time you two... hehe!

Well see ye, hope that you will have fun typing! And coming up with new stories! XD

Aw, this is really cute. I love it! And I don't even watch One Piece..I read it in the just-in section, heh. I really, realy like it and I wouldn't object if you wrote another chapter! I would look forward to it... :)