Aww, that was really nice. It's great to see a part of the storyline that would've happened (such as Tak suddenly becoming so famous) but which the games skipped over. It was nice seeing a more emotional/introspective moment for these characters.

ee, very good fiv, awsum.

Such a cute story! I don't know why, but it reminds me of yaoi a bit. :P You should keep going.

This was very good! I didn't think it was out of character for Lok at all. Keep up the awesomeness!