Yay! This is a rare pairing! I love it very much! I love how you used the dialogue from the series in the beginning and then alluded back to it at the very end. Awesome job, lovely discriptions! As for that dumbass that called you 'sick', tell them to get a life to worrying about a CARTOON child...it's fake, not real, and therefore not sick. Again, excellent work! I wasn't disappointed at all!

Oh my god, *biggest bloody nose of the century* This, is frickin amazing. I was on a little Shuei streak, and then I found this and it was perfect. Love it, really good job.

You. Are. SICK! He is THIRTEEN YEARS OLD!

I strongly advise you to seek therapy IMMEDIATELY! In fact, skip the therapy and just turn yourself in to the police as a sex offender, that way you won't have to pay for it.

Next time, keep your paedofillic fantasies in your head, you sick fuck!

Yay ! This is the only fic about Shuei/Sanzo I found and it is exactly what I wanted *o*

Great work !