Well, this was a trip! XD

This felt like a more fleshed out version of a SpongeBob episode and that is awesome! Oh yeah, there was plenty of humor alright (especially the lollipops), but I loved how you added in those bits of characterization, especially for SpongeBob.

Overall, nicely done story! I seriously enjoyed it!

"The food's decent, and pretty cheap, too! Not like the prices at your place! "

Maybe I'm wrong, but if the food at the chum buck is decent and pretty cheap, how come no one's gone there? I thought it was really expensive and the quality was crappy...

Also, didn't Squidward drive a car in at least one episode? I remember in the episode 'Dying for Pie' he drove a car to work...but I'm not sure if that was the only episode :P

Anyway, those were my nitpicks. Other than that, the story was really good and well-structured. The characters were in character and the humor was true to the series without feeling like it was too stiff.

Great chapter :) I like how you set up Spongebob's second crash. And the bit between Spongebob, Patrick, and Squidward about the 'contract' lol.

Haha, that was a good chapter. I liked the little squabble between Plankton and Karen.

Hehe, I like how you characterize Patrick. I usually prefer more description, but since this is so well-written, I guess I don't mind it.

This is really good so far. Very true to the show :)

I love this story!

Wow, what a ride this one was! (pun not intended, feel free to run me over. HA! I intended that one!)

Anyway, this was very good. For the writer of "Bigger than that" I have to say that I love how you're able to shift to diffrent types of writing so good! (From serious romantic to humorus.)

And BOY was this humorus! The jokes were great! An itty-bitty little out-of-character with Spongebob Squarepants, mind you (especially the Karen/Plankton line, even though it was gold), and a little random at times but all good.

Gary's partsClassic

When it comes to the part about Spongebob's age, I think your guess is right on the money. From my point of view, he's has to be a legal adult (for obvious reasons), but he DOES on occation act like what you would call your steriotypical college-man. There are hints of such behaviour of him and Patrick in both "Pranks A Lot" and "Mid-Life Crustation". But I guess it comes right down to opinion, untill the writers officialy state it in an episode. Untill then, it's an open case.

The part where Patrick went homocidal flew right over my head, but the reast of the story was original and very entertaining.

A pleasure to read. I hope that in the future they do an episode where Spongebob finally gets his license (I don't know how good it'll be, seeing as how the recent episodes have been so lacking), but untill then I'm going to assume it would be just like this story. D I'm glad you wrote another Spongebob story.

its good so far

“'Stop being homicidal… I’ll give you a lollipop,' said Sandy, trying to hide her fear.

"Mr. Krabs immediately relaxed. 'A lollipop? If it’s free, I’ll take it!'”

ROFLMAO Great to see some light humor from you.

Everyone seems IC, except Pearl is a little too intense in this chapter. It's not too bothersome, though. I don't have a problem with SpongeBob's age, either. It makes sense because in the movie he made a big deal about proving he wasn't a kid anymore.

You definitely did the show justice. This could be an episode. I LOL'd when Patrick said “We could bring along this guy too!” and grabbed a random fish. So SpongeBobish.

Wow, this is one of the best SBSP fics I've ever read. Good plot, very in-character, and funny! Also the bit about Gary eating his meow was great, I could really picture that. Awesome fic!

That was AWEsome! it deserves a spongebob episode lol...

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-Jaeh xD

W0T AGAIN AGAIN! Loved the story...you have a great writing style, a talent that not alot of internet writers posess. ALSO, isn't "Krusty Crew" supposed to be "Krusty Krew"? Just a thought XD anyway, 10/10!

~Meg~