yeah, this s/l got ugly, I suppose. At least it revealed an interesting tidbit about Tracy's history-the abortion. I thought it was brave of her to tell Lulu, who can be quite cruel.

She determines not to confide in Robert, then does just that.

I don't know the Paul Hornsby reference here (just began watching this year!), but thank you for putting in just enough detail so a reader can guess at the nature of things between him and Tracy. Another thing to research...

Chester! A training lover. LOL I love the thought that T. would have been self-aware enough to realize that, at the age of seventeen.

Nice touch to add Tracy's memory of observing Dillon, as a small, sleeping child. She doesn't allow anyone to see her soft side, often enough.

God, I wish you were one of the GH writers. I just wish you still wrote fanfic for GH. The current s/l could benefit from enhancement and the filling in of gaps.

I'm working my way through the patchy clips I find on Ytube, and fics relevant to them. I've saved so many of yours to reread, so thought it was time to start commenting. I'll try to stay more on the topic of the story, next time!

This is fabulously brilliant! You captured Tracy and Luke perfectly. Please write more fics like this in the future-you have a real knack for it!

You make being at home all day worth while. See, these are story lines that need to appear on that thing they call a show.

I really like how Tracy was changed by her ordeal. Sometimes I expect her to take the punches and roll with them in silence, but I really liked when she asked Luke for support.

Somebody should make Edward eat Crisco.

Excellent update Ms. Lady!

I haven't left you any reviews on these stories(sry about that). But I loved them all...you are doing a great job:)

You know I loved this. :)

Tomorrow's scene REALLY needs to air the exact same way. *crosses fingers*

I'm so happy I finally got around to reading this.

I wish I knew what to say other than "Wonderful job. I really enjoyed this." Heh. It's the truth though.

Your stuff is just so real. :)

Aww, this is beautiful. I just love your stuff.

*gives standing ovation*

The scene seemed unfinished to me too. *sigh* But I'm glad you completed it.

As with all your stories, I could definitely see this happening. And I'm hoping the Paul/Tracy and Dillon/Lulu comparison comes out if/when that certain Tracy/Lulu spoiler happens.

Also..I like that you not only started with the GH dialogue but incorporated narrative into it as well. Wonderful job, as always.

Well in this chapter she was a concern mother something she really doesnt like to show but really is!

I love Luke and Tracy together they make me laugh!

Okay I began reading again and I like this one as well! Keep up the good work!

What a good mini story! You wrote it really good. I loved the fact that she realized that she was alone with Dillon. M that would explain a lot now!