Loved it :D well done x

A happy ending fanfic. I like it.

So congrats on ur past graduation. honestly i dont even see why mari is in this story except to add fluff of whatever. its interesting.

this is actually something that i dont read everyday. its a nice change in stories... so its good thts its different from what i see. keep it up

Goddamn nymphos...loved it, even if things did move a bit fast ;p

Aww, that was cute!

your absolutly cool. I love this story.

AND TO

wiznotditz. your a fucking retard. u simply have no taste. why bother? i hate people like you.

So what if a story has grammar mistake. Nothing is perfect, just awesome.

think before you act.

or just keep it to yourself.

I ur story so awesome !

Loved the ending!

nic

You're story is unbelievably stupid! There are a huge number grammar and spelling mistakes! aren't you graduated from high school? Even 5th graders can do better than a dum bass like you! In a lot of chapters there are scenes that don't even make sense! you are a pathetic author if you think anyone likes this story well they're lying!

that rocked

Ih Aint Gonna Geh Longer If Yahh Ask Lyk Dah!

Yew Aintt No King Genius

aw

so good, yeah

GREAT little fic!

it was super cute!

nice story