What a brilliant perfect explaination for BA’s fear of flying. believable and so sad

Incredible story. Thanks so much for writing.

Oh, this was good. I love how only Murdock and BA know the real reason. The real, horrific, evil reason.

Hm Thought that I had replied to this one already but apparantly not. Very nicely done. Though I am curious if Hannibal ever gets the full story from either Murdock or BA. Keep up the great work. I think that the characterizations were very well done.

Nice, Partly, Nice.

Really good fic. Wish it had more Murdock angst, if you take requests...

Excellent fic though, well written,

Sparky

This is an awesome story ,from character dialogue down to the details like the buzzing flies in the jungle. I loved this story.

You know, I'm really starting to like your style. You really have a way with tone, character, and voice, and your plots aren't the cliched drivel one usually finds on You really are a good writer-and that's not something I say very often. This one strikes me as somewhat of a rushed job. It was very good, but you had a few trouble spots with spelling and grammar. From your other works I know you aren't one of the brain-dead teeny-boppers who typically populate this site, so I'm not taking those mistakes as typical of your work. I can only suggest getting a beta. Betas tend to slow down the writing process enough to let you notice the teensy mistakes.

Seriously, it's a really good fic.

Very sad... War is hell.

I have an inquiry: Was Murdock sad? Because he seemed non-chalantly at B.A.'s weeping and all that happened. Or maybe he was more strong (at masking his feelings). Or maybe he was just acting like the tough guy-back then; and holding all of that inside is what made him who we've come to know him as. I don't know maybe it was just me. Great fic anyway.

That was an excellent story, very interesting to see an explanantion of BA's fear. And effective to have something so horrible behind what is usually played for laughs on the show and in fan fiction.

I see what you mean about the POV, but if yu had chosen one or the other you would have lost so much interesting information that it would have been a shame. So the omniscient viewpoint was the right choice I think.