| Reviews for Gold Tinted Wax |
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Lady Mage chapter 4 . 2/21/2007 OH. It's going to get sent! Please update soon Gem! Lady Mage |
Lady Mage chapter 3 . 2/21/2007 I love how you're developing Roald's charachter. |
Lady Mage chapter 2 . 2/21/2007 O, that's so sweet. I love the relationship they have. |
Lady Mage chapter 1 . 2/21/2007 Very nice. Another one of your stories to go on my favorites list. you write so well... I'm trying to get back on the boat after two years, but I haven't released anything yet. all of my old stuff is trivial. Lady Mage |
Lady Silvamord chapter 4 . 7/9/2006 Oh oh ooh, Faleron! E! It's adorable that he keeps a journal-diary of sorts. The first-person narrative was interesting, too. The bit about how he's been to war and all that, and then him being intimidated by his little spit of a cousin who just happens to be Empress made me giggle. :) I feel sorry for him, and I liked the bit you put in about Roald and Kally's relationship, in their journal. It must be a huge strain for him, keeping something that big hidden away from everyone, especially when that "everyone" includes the lady in question's elder brother, who happens to be a friend of his. I guess I just love the way you've characterized him and his thoughts on his and Kally's relationship after it's ended. I'm starting to want to hear more from Kally in Carthak, now, although I'm also curious about what the letter from the palace is about. Eagerly awaiting the next update! *grin* |
Jeweled Rose chapter 4 . 7/9/2006 Yay! It's Faleron! He was always such a sweetie. Now I'm dying to know if he'll send his letter, and what's in the letter from the palace. Update soon! |
Rhys chapter 4 . 7/9/2006 Well,we know what's going to happen next,don't we? *sigh* that family is so broken. good job,Merry mi' pip. Adios, rhys |
kotokodainetohru chapter 4 . 7/9/2006 That was really good. Please continue! I can't wait for the next chapter! KDCorLiz-E |
kotokodainetohru chapter 3 . 7/6/2006 It gets sadder every time. Please continue though. KDCorLiz-E |
opalshine chapter 3 . 7/2/2006 wow give us more its really good in the next chapter can u do smethin bout kally and falron? pls |
Evilstrawberry chapter 3 . 7/2/2006 I really like this story so far. It's well written and very intersting. I cna't wait for more! |
Jeweled Rose chapter 3 . 7/1/2006 I love the insight into the Conte family, and how you tell so much about characters, without them even being present in the story. Update soon! |
Jeweled Rose chapter 1 . 7/1/2006 You have such an amazing writing style: it was poetic, yet fresh and easy to read. As weird as it is for cousins to be together (are they cousins in the books?), I love how you paired Kalasin and Faleron. I alwasy really liked him in the books, but he wasn't really talked about much. I can't wait to read the rest! |
bookpirate chapter 3 . 7/1/2006 I really like it, and can't wait to see how it turns out. Keep it up. |
Strapless chapter 2 . 6/27/2006 This is a wonderful exploration of the relationship between Kalasin and Roald. You've really tapped into Roald's character. For all his lack of screentime in the books, your portrayal of him is very believeable and in character. The line in which Kally reflects that Roald succeeds in everything struck me as very much a trait of his. And OMG, you got Kalasin/Faleron in there. (Whee!) It's interesting to see how time and distance and Things Not Said are straining Kally's relationships-and even perhaps her one with Kaddar? Now that we've had Roald's point of view are we going to see Faleron's? |