Might want to give the chapter a read through after some sleep. First line for example, "There we no two ways about it - the girl had a headache." "Were" is missing "re".

Hmmm, curious, very curious.

I like the Harry/Pansy pairing. My first love is Harry/Hermione, followed by Harry/Tonks. I think that JKR ended up with Harry/Ginny by leaving out Molly Weasley's conniving, plus the BLATENT use of love potions.

You're a great writer, keep on going!

Noreen

also very good. you, my friend, are one talented author.

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri

Hey there. I don't remember if I've actually reviewed in the past, but I love your stories. One thing I thought I'd point out: you used the word allign when I think you meant align. :) Just figured you'd want to know. Peace, and keep the good writing going.

Great loved it

Nice. Terry Boot and now Pansy Parkinson.

I have to say, reading this one-shot was more enjoyable than some of the recent chapters you have put out. Too much focus on the romance, not so much the plot, sometimes overtaking entire chapters.

I really wish Harry and Tonks hadn't already worked their feelings out. The whole Harry/Pansy/Tonks triangle had great potential. Oh well.

Well done.

Very good, I like your beginning. I'd like to see where your headed with this, its interesting.

Interesting. I obviously hadn't read this when I reviewed the Goblet a few minutes ago. THIS is where Pansy's character really gets going.

Hmm...the next one could be Luna, Fleur, Krum or maybe even that Russian girl. My money's on Fleur.

er why chouldent you put these things n 1 story now ive gota put u on my autor alert list i dont like using that i only like the story alert list o wel

I like it!

Interesting. Great story.