I loved it

oops, chapter 3 not 4

why did in chapter 4 I was reminded of San Winchester?

Your story is hilarious!

Well done, it's actually the first story I read that is that funny, all along, without being too much or without having any plot.
Excellent, I loved the part where the kids say "I'm gonna get laid"; I laughed so much!
And all the Gai's moments are so precious! x)

Kakashi and Iruka are so cute and both soooo perverted!

Thanks for this, real fun to read!

this is nerve wracking! whats going to happen! theres 8 more chapters...

why do you call kakashi the scarecrow? Is he a real scare crow? Jk. But seriously. Just because Kakashi means that in Japanese, doesn't mean we have to call him that. It really distracted me from enjoying the amazing plot that I was enjoying until I saw that. lol

Ok glad thats what happened. I hope the curse was just an illusion like that. I was getting pretty nervous about that actually...

Oh am I supposed to be sad Mizuki is dead in this one? lol

aw this is getting a little scary :(

lol that little nut is the curse?! jk I can see hes had things happen to those he loved. I just laugh cause it was cute lol

Hmm very interesting. I like how you write Iruka. It's cute.

Ok something interesting is going on. lol. I stumbled across this fic after going from this couple to Harry Potter, but ended up right back here again. LOL mean to BEEEE! . great story so far

Good story! I enjoyed reading it! :)

-Yvonne

Cutest thing ever my goodness I giggled like a schoolgirl and laughed till I almost passed out and squealed from kakashis antics haha a really good read! :D

That was such a delightful read!