I love how you illustrated Miriel's flight from the palace. Her last prayer is hauntingly beautiful.

A great story. Very well written.

Anything about Miriel is quite tragic I think. I like the insight you've given into Miriel's mind. The inclusion of Earendur was nice. He gave a ray of light and hope into Miriel's dark life.

The addition of Faramir waking up from the above was clever, especially since it was Faramir who always had dreamt of Numenor, as it says in the books. Thanks for writing!

Beautifully written. I wish I had the patience to lug ALL the way through the Silmarillion so I could enjoy this to it's full extent.

I think this is beautiful. Númenor always felt very remote to me, and difficult to care about compared with Middle Earth (which is 'home') and all the dear people in it, but you really make Númenor matter, as it obviously did to Faramir.

By the way, is this baby already born, or on the way? If the latter, how do they know it's going to be a girl? If the former, why hasn't she been named yet?

A very touching story.

What a lovely story! Many have written of Faramir's dream of the wave that drowned Numenor, but rarely (if ever) do I see one that delineates an actual connection with the people of the lost island.

I assume that young Earendur is the ancestor of the House of Hurin - his connection to Miriel is a lovely touch.

Well done.