| Reviews for Law and Order HFIL Department The Shorts |
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   samus18 chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 I'm so happy I found these, I never forgot the first fic you wrote. XD This one doesn't disappoint, and I know the rest won't! I can see this as a hilarious comic series. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/28/2013 Fukin hilarious both stories was hopin u would've killed everyone but the way u endded was funnier |
| A big fan chapter 13 . 12/13/2011 Read all your work, and this story is my all time favourite! Funniest fan fic I've yet to read, I wish you would continue to write more :( thanks for all the laughs! |
| GGMK chapter 13 . 9/7/2011 Another amazingly funny fic. I don't even know why its so good, but it has me laughing every five paragraphs, sometimes sooner. Its too bad that you stopped, but I don't mind. What you did write was very funny. Goku, Cell, Frieza, Cooler... who would have thought that they'd make a great comedy team? |
| Mk chapter 13 . 4/25/2011 Wow, I really liked this chapter, although I don't think that Cooler could outsmart all those guys. |
| Mk chapter 12 . 4/25/2011 Poor Cell and Frieza. Now Goku can just beat them up with SS3. |
| Cure Moonlight is the best chapter 13 . 2/20/2011 Me:This is awesome can't wait till you put up another story and Cooler is one bad- Goku,Cell and Freeza:SHUT YOUR MOUTH! Me: I'm just talking about Cooler Goku,Cell and Freeza: Then we can dig it! |
| The Dark Temptress chapter 13 . 1/12/2010 lol! oh wow these stories are hilarious, I love your sense of humour. It's very entertaining and makes for an excellent read. please update soon :) ~ |
| Bloodra chapter 13 . 12/5/2009 I simply LOVE your story! I read every single one so far witin two days. I like your sense of randomness. The part with the exploding puppy was the most hilarious part in all of your shorts. Also, I like how you restored Cooler's brain only to be rid of it again. Please make more soon.!~ |
| Hat O' Doom chapter 13 . 5/24/2008 Just read the entire thing, and I gotta say you have a talent for insane humor. Congrats! |
| densetsu no super saiyajin chapter 13 . 5/11/2008 another great chapter shame it took so long though just a suggestion but how about doing a parody of movie 12 (goku to vegeta fusion reborn) |
| Talos the Saiyan chapter 12 . 3/14/2008 Good fic, very funny could Bardock possibly make an appearance? |
| Drist chapter 12 . 2/2/2008 you may put majin buu to this story |
| Small Alien chapter 12 . 11/26/2007 Hello there! Aah... I read and reread your wonderful stories. I am completely fascinated with your stuff; everything you come up with is original and... great and wonderful! I just can't keep away from it... It's just amazing how you write Goku, Cell, Frieza and Cooler (his OOCness is great! :P) and the humor... I smile just thinking about it! I swear, if I had an account here on FF, I would fave all of your work. I don't have any actual suggestions, but I would really like to see more of Cooler. Not from his POV though; maybe just read about some circumstances surrounding him or something. Let's see... Don't have any constructive critique either. You already said yourself that you know your grammar "isn't your strongest point", which anyway isn't enough to disturb the reading, so... Write more soon! I promise I will read it! :) /Hanna PS. I always feel stupid when I try to correct someone else's grammar. :P This leads to a "PS.", in which I explain that English isn't my first language. ... |
| Writer-Person chapter 12 . 11/3/2007 Another great chapter as always, haha, it was hilarious. Hmm... As an idea for a following chapter. You could have Freeza captured by the Saiyans of hell? That would be unexpected. |
