YALL BETTER PM THE AUTHOR WE NEED TO SEE THIS FINISHED PLEASE CONTINUE DONT LET THIS STORY DIE

I hope to see this finished one day. Until then, take all of the time you need. Great story so far!

I Don't know if you are still active on FF but just needed to leave this review desperately.

I can remember all the way back to when I was a 13 year old girl reading your story when it had come out, excitedly waiting for the updates, waiting to find out more. Nearly 10 years later and this story still sticks with me. I couldn't remember the name but the story always stuck with me and was one of my fondest memories (It took a hell load of digging to find it, I had tried to look for it in the past but never been able to until today!)

There was always something so endearing about this story, I could never put my finger quite on it. Maybe it was reading a story of such a pure love that I as a 13 year old (and still now, if I'm completely honest haha) always dreamed of one day having

Chapter 12 was the one that was always clear as day in my memory, the flashback, the rain the awkwardness of first times. I can look back on this story now and even though I have grown up and gone through the teenage phase of my life (not quite getting pregnant but still average teenage stuff lol) I still am absolutely besotted with this story!

It was during one of the hardest periods of my life and this was one of those little rays of sunshine that I hold dearest.

It would be cool to see it finished but you know what? In many ways it's quite fitting it isnt finished. Because by finishing it then that is the end. By not finishing it you are always left with the wonder of 'what next?' and isn't that what life is all about? The 'What next?'? So as much as I would love to see it finished I'm also at a state of mind that I'm okay with it not being finished :)

Babbling aside I just want to say thank you. Thank you for creating a story that I have always enjoyed and remember nearly 10 years later :) I will continue to look on the memory and joy of reading it and now that I have finally relocated it I can finally reread and enjoy it even more all over again 3

With great Love
A very old and still true Fan xx

where is tHE REST

i read tifa's voice in a deep man's southern accent.

:'( Please continue! Such a great story like this one needs to have an end! :)

Please update. Omg it's getting to the good part XD Dammit Im in love with this story. Zerith is so freaking cute, Cloti too, ,,•x•,,

Please update, I'm waiting for a lovely n happy ending.

واو واو اجمل شى قراءته احسنت عملا

Hi there is the new year of this message in the way of the other than that is not the way

Where's the update?

This chapter is very interesting..
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hope that the writer want to continue this story till the end.

I love this!

...i have waited 2 months after when you said you would release the next chapter why is it not up!

Accidentaly clicked the post button(goddamn mobile phones). Anyway I hope you finish the story just as you said. Best of luck to you and your family