This is silly and I know I'm like 13 years later (lmao) but this is one of my favorite fanfics of all time, it has everything, Ichigo, Rukia, Isshin, Urahara, Ichigo's hollow and interactions that could be amazing if Kubo decided to do a better work.
It's just adorable. I love it.

Fantastic, thank you- dark _and_ somehow sweet! I got a little lost in the time transitions (I thought Ichigo escaped after Isshin/Urahara caged him) but picked it up by the end. :)

I really do love that tail.

This was such a pain to read-need a freaking navigator to try and figure out where and what's happening. I imagine this was best out of three or something, else that was one sad lot of writers. jsm

That was kinda awesome. And really d'aaaaw at the end.

One thing though, it sounds odd that she "brushes his shoulders with her pinkies". That seems really unnatural, to only touch someone with your pinkies.

Good work though.

Amazing story. I really like the format, and it took me two readings to fully appreciate it. Thank you for writing this. Cheers :)

the ending was just ADORABLE. Wonderful job!

Wow. Very well done. The feel of this story is wonderful.

Cool story!

I like the way you wrote this story starting in the beginning and the middle and working your way to the end. I also really like Isshin. Poor crazy loon. :D

Haha that was pretty good!

I liked it :D

ahh, the angst. however, on the whole i can imagine it happening. a very isshin-type reaction too...

Shakespeare FTW!

But seriously, this fic was amazing. The scenario itself is already intriguing, but the way you delivered it was pitch perfect. The way Hollow!Ichigo was himself, but not quite, the line Rukia walks between guilt and determination, and, of course Isshin. I don't know how you got his mix of pure weirdness and seriousness just right, but you did. In fact, his interactions with Ichigo were probably one of my favorite parts of this fic.

To top at all off, you managed to get Rukia and Ichigo into a form of romantic resolution while still keeping them, well, them. Of course, I love it when Ichigo's an awkward teenage boy no matter what the circumstances.

Thanks for writing this!

very believable'

I keep reading this periodically and it never fails to amaze me! excellent work!