Reviews for Unexpected Affair
Anal Beads chapter 6 . 6/2/2017
This was a rollercoaster from beginning to end.

You know, the type that makes you throw up twice - Once during the middle, and twice at the end.

I enjoyed reading this in an Ironic sense only.

10/10 IGN "Not enough Demon-sex"
BloodandIvory chapter 1 . 4/11/2017
Beautifully written!
Allium394 chapter 6 . 9/29/2012
Very strange but creative plot line. I enjoyed it!

Also note: Murdoc's last name is spelled "Niccals" not "Nicalls" as it's written a few times in here.
lordofawesome chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
I don't want to be critical, but Noodle is 21 in 2011, not 19.
SorryI'mDoneGoodbye chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Well like most of the fans. I did enjoy reading your take on MurdocxNoodle Romance. However the only thing that wasn't my cup of tea was trying to make out what on earth he was muttering. I know from fandom experince that he does seem to not make much sense. But all the lines of story-telling. It seemed twice as difficult to keep in mind where the plots for each chapter were headed.

So in all fairness continue to make whatever strikes your fancy!
Lola the Evil Bunny chapter 6 . 2/16/2011
I really loved this story! 3
Taco-NinjaCow chapter 6 . 10/31/2010
Omg it's the best story i've read for years! :'3 It got me crying lots of times. urgh... couldn't get my eyes from the text.
AlbinoLungs chapter 6 . 6/10/2010
I really didn't like this Murdoc nice guy set-up. The story could have had a more original turn to it if he stayed the same through out. Still, very interesting.
StarMimi chapter 6 . 4/29/2010
Wonderful! Loved it so much!
vivisect chapter 6 . 3/21/2010
The last two chapters sort of surprised me. I expected Murdoc to be way more sinister when he finally got his hands on Noodle. I'm not sure if I like it.

But I DO like that you have "stages" of immortality. Excellent concept. Well, off the read the sequel!
vivisect chapter 5 . 3/21/2010
Ahahahaha!

"I love you"

"I love you too"

"I-I'm going to go burn your car"

"k"
Jaldabaoth666 chapter 6 . 5/24/2009
Aw...This was a great story! I'm in love with Murdoc, now.
OtakuRiborn chapter 6 . 5/1/2009
ok, so this is great. i was totally enthralled. REALLY great work, keep up writing!
Hiezen chapter 4 . 11/12/2008
it seems i've become a fan of your writing...interesting...
Vilsy chapter 6 . 5/2/2008
Very nicely written, you had me gripping my seat in a few chapters... great suspense! However, the last 2 chapters sort of surprised me. Not in a bad way, I think it gave the story nice closure, but from all your description in the previous chapters, I expected much more sinister behavior from Murdoc when he finally got his hands on Noodle again.
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