aww cute! ;-)

WAAAAAH~! this made me cry ;~;

*faves* I LOVE THIS SO MUCH ( so sad and beautiful.. poor wrath, poor envy.. ;~;

this was so cute and sad at the same time!

Kawaii!

(That's Japanese for he/she/it is cute)

I don't usually read EnvyxWrath, since I always think of Wrath as a very young child, so it seems a little weird to me, but this was really good. I love the way you talked about Wrath's fear of Envy.

And the repetition in the first chapter was genius. You needed to do it in the second though, because it doesn't seem finished otherwise.

Omedeto, omedeto, omedeto :)

(That's congratulations)

teehee, I read this at DA too :D it's greatness! so angsty and fluffalicious!

Oh, that's so sweet! I love this story so much. I must have read it a thousnad times! Every time I get back into the Envy/Wrath mood I read this story, thanks so much for adding another chapter! Much love!

Aw! Poor Envy! Poor Wrath! AW!

That was really good! As for a bit of constructive criticism, I didn't see many spelling errors (not that I ever notice them...), but there were quite a few gramatical things. Since we're now leaving Orlando, I'll review the next chapter later and explain everything!

Much love!

sad- good story, though. kinda short.

;A;''

This is the only Fanfict so far that makes me cry.

but I can't stop Reading it, I love it so much

;3;' Please contuine so I can cry tears of utter joy?

C':

Awesome story, loved the two beginnings and endings you used!

This is awsome :D ur writing is so good and I just love the story ! keep it up I'll keep reading ...

aw thats cute

To have been brought up as sins themselves, we can only imagine what it must feel like for them when they start to feel 'pure' emotions- such as love. It would only make sense that their love was a tainted one. You did well describing the confusion and the hurt. Awesome fic! A fave! There really should be more Envy/Wrath around y'know!

That was beautiful! I love how you started and ended with the same sentence. Brilliant!

pleasepleaseplease dont stop writing envy/wrath! please us envy/wrath fans depend on the few brave writers u dar eto write suck couples! lol, great story, please write more!