I hope it isn't too late to review. :(

Meh, who cares, I'll do it anyways. - One of the best TRC fanfics out there; it's so hard to find these awesome fanfics its like, a miracle to find one. This one has a lot of potential. You should write more stories like these; you will go far in the future. You have an amazing writing talent; you shouldn't waste it. XD You're an incredible author, I can tell. I love this story; I hope you will continue more with these kind of stories; they're amazing. :D

Take care,

~MusicAngel92

This made me cry. ;o;

Of course, so did the manga, but yeah.

This was perfect. *weep*

Thank you for writing it.

Keep up the good work!

Very nice. And...W00t! You're a KuroxTomoyo shipper!

OH GOD THANK YOU. THE END, SWEET GOD, THE END (andthepartbeforethat and the one before and "(he would have wondered in what world they were brothers and in what world one of them didn’t exist and in what world they walked to school together andinwhatworldthey’rehappy)" and "He died because there wasn’t room for him and because Shaoran was more important than he was and because Fai needed his magic back and because Kurogane needed the fuel to fight and because he’d already worried Mokona enough and because *there was no Sakura for him anymore*.")

I'm crying again now. I'm still not over chapter 209. Ç_Ç

THANK YOU FOR CLONII-II-II-IIE. *sobs*

YAY! UPDATE! Oh wow...I was one of the ones this was dedicated to...I feel so...honored. That's really cool!

Are the first two paragraphs your own works? Because they are vey interesting and deep. If not, then they fit the oneshot very well.

As for the story itself, the repetition in the first paragraph is done very nicely. It is some what choppy, but adds to the syle of it, and makes it sound as if memories are coming in short amounts, suddenly, but all flowing together...er...did that make sense?

Wow, that was very nicely done. It definately shows the two Syaorans as SEPARATE PEOPLE. Because, I agree with you, they ARE. Just because Shaoran saw all those memories through Syaoran, Syaoran himself experianced them as well. They both fell in love, and made friends with Kurogane and Fai, but it wasn't just because they were the same person.

As well, his death held so much good emotion, and was...happy even though it was sad. Because he felt emotions again, and he knew he did exist as himself.

I have to say, my absolute favoite part of this, was the fact you added Syaoran Li and Sakura Kinamoto into this at the end. (it was them, right?) That was nicely done, and I love how Syaoran Li had a dream of the other two Syaorans, experianceing it in SYAORAN'S point of view, instead of Shaoran's. Nicely done, it shows how all of them are CONNECTED but DIFFERENT.

Sick of capital letters yet? It was the only way I could stress different points. Anyway, very nicely done. I love how you add so much good emotion into these sort chapters.

Oh one more thing, if it isn't too big a deal, would you mind reading my story 'Nightmare' and commenting on it? I attempted deep, semi angsty short chapters as well.

You were kind of my inspiration for it I must admit.

Oh, I almost forgot! The last line was incredibly well done! I LOVE the fact that the word just fades out, and the you had the '...' s continuing for a little while. Amazing way to end it! Loved it! I have to go now!

Hm...I like this one a lot, but I must say that it confused me a lot. During the beginning, I thought that it was Watanuki talking, but then I thought it was the Syaoran clone, seeing things through the real Syaoran, but the thoughts are his. And then, the last line makes me think that the whole exchange, even the clone Syaoran's thoughts, were really Watanuki's dream...but I'm not sure.

Anyway, nice style! I really like it! The fact that there is no capital letters except for names and dialogue was very cool, because it kind of flows together without beging grammatically correct, and was a very nice thought. The repetition at parts ('failed, failed...' and 'waiting to..., waiting to...) was very well done, and definately adds to the emotion, which there was a lot of. I also love how the speaker, who ever it is, keeps hearing 'Don't!', but not the finished quote until the end.

All in all, this one has to be one of my favorites. It is kind of confusing, and I had to read it twice and still don't get some of it. But that confusion actually adds to it, because the speaker is confused himself. Loved it, and once again, I am so jealous of your writing ability. I would love it if you were to update this, but don't feel pressured to at all!

Umm...I haven't actually read this far in the series, though so I feel like I can't comment the best, but I felt the need to comment anyway. It was short, but sweet, as the saying goes. The opening and ending lines are both very well done. And the parts in parentheses are well done again. The (minutes, hours, years?) was cool, because it shows how the time has all flown together, and he is not quite sure how long he has been away.

I also love the 'selfishly happy', because it shows the bond Kurogane has created between the others. Really, no one focuses on him WITHOUT doing KuroFai! RAWR! Anyway, very well written, good style and word choice. The one spoken line was well done, especially since there is no 'said Tomoyo'. The repetition of 'relief' and 'home' are nice too, and I love the little bit of KuroTomo added in there. Nicely done, I liked it alot even though I didn't quite know what was going on.

One thing I forgot to comment on on the last chapter. I LOVE how you says Yuuko wishes, because she is usally the one granting wishes.

As for this one, again very well written, and the style it was written in was superb. I love the parts in parantheses, and I must admit I have attempted a style like this for 'Nightmare' which is my collection of oneshotes focusing on this part in the series, but I don't think I pulled it off as well as you did.

The 'a nightmare can only last so long' is a good line in an excellent place. In my opinion, there are two things that that is saying: 1) there is hope, hope that this nightmare, this horrible event will finally end, because nightmares don't last that long...and 2) he can only talk with the other him in his nightmares, and they only last a little while, so his time to talk with the other him is now over and he is once again alone.

Another thing I like about this one, is that Kurogane is also featured at the end, and so you have Kurogan'e feelings, Shaoran's feelings, and a bit of Syaoran's feelings, but it is not yaoi in anyway. I have only seen one good fic focusing on the relationship between Kurogane and Syaoran WITHOUT being yaoi...

Anyway, amazing well done in character, feeling, and emotion. The conversation between the clone and the original is well doen, and man...I'm jealous...

I'm so sorry! I meant to comment on the rest of these, but it completely blew my mind! I feel I HAVE to comment on all of these because they are all so very well done!

As for this one, again, the style is very well done, and I love the way you separate the last line. I hope you don't mind, but I attempted that myself after reading this story.

As for Yuuko, I'm glad someone else decided to comment on her. This is exactly how I see her as, and her thoughts and personality was very well done. The way you describe the characters without saying their names was well done, and the whole thing was very well written!

This one is very orginal. When readers think of the characters who suffered after that part no one thinks of Mokona. It was orginal, and it shows a very different side of Mokona and I like that a lot.

As well, I really like the ending sentence, and how it splits into different lines.

Very poetic, very well written, very orginal and very good emotion.

Wow, this one had great emotion. The style was fantastic, I love the way it was worded and the heartbeat was incredible. Expecially the last really long strung together one that just fades out.

I loved this one. It was sad, but the emotion was great. Great job.

Again, amazingly well done. I love the style of it. I also love the repetition of the line 'My most precious person.' I love how you describe the sceen, and yet you don't. Because everything is happening so fast and she doesn't quite understand what is going on. Very well done again.

This is my favorite one so far, for a few minutes. My favorite part of the whole thing is how you say he sees Syaoran but he can't find Syaoran. I absolutely love that.

The way it is written and worded and the style is all really well done again, just like the previous ones.

I also love that is shows how Kurogane - big, strong, indifferent, uncaring (or so he acts) Kurogane - has grown attached to Syaoran and Fai, and he wants to protect Fai but he doesn't want to fight Syaoran.

Very well done, and the ending line was great.

Once again, real short but really well done. Good emotion and good depth once again. Having those words in italiacs all really close together...I've tried that style before, but I couldn't pull it off the way you did.

I love the last line, and love how it just kind of stops. Very well done.

Wow, that was really well done. I really love reading angsty fics about this part in the series because you can go so deep with it. But I can't write angst or depth well, so...darn. This was well written and the style was very well done.

It's short, but there was depth and good emotion. I like how you said 'with more grace than a dead man should have'. I have to say that was my favorite line, that and the very ending one.