| Reviews for It's A Long, Long Way |
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2019 Dude. You're making me cry. |
achillius chapter 1 . 3/26/2017 im so in love with this |
paracuties chapter 1 . 12/19/2016 Wow this was surprisingly emotional. I didn't expect it to be so dark; it wrapped up very neatly, however, and I really enjoyed reading it. Interesting format. Great flow. |
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 7/24/2016 Awe! So bittersweet! DX But so charming! |
InsanityIsClarity chapter 1 . 7/7/2015 You killed off Iroh. And Aang. You had Ozai kill Aang. YOU KILLED UNCLE IROH! YOU KILLED AVATAR AANG! This story was well written, and the not-depressing parts were great, but seriously? Now I've got to check your page and read a story of yours that isn't sad, because you are a great writer... but use your powers for good please! |
Unidentified Pie chapter 1 . 12/20/2014 This is really well-written! I love 10, even though it's real sad! Please keep going! :) |
Anon chapter 1 . 8/7/2014 Thank you for providing a much needed gen story. This was lovely and terribly bittersweet, much like life. I loved this, and now I'm off to see if you have any more ATLA wonderfulness. |
Obvious Ghost chapter 1 . 11/17/2013 Dang... This took a turn. Still, wonderful story. |
Kelev chapter 1 . 6/13/2013 This may have been done in 2006, but it's still so well written, and incredibly cruel- if only because you killed off Aang and Zuko's desired ending turns out to be one he doesn't really want after all, and it's too late to change anything. Kudos for (another) great story! |
Yuu3 chapter 1 . 2/3/2013 Nice |
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 2/9/2012 Wow. This is incredibly good. The format is almost like a poem, and you do a good job of showing how the relationships progress. I love all the friendships you build. But the ninth "fact" seemed to really be many facts - you could have made the list Fifteen Facts. The ending was kind of sudden and surprising, but you did a good job with the emotions. Your writing is simple and beautiful. Good job. |
quintilis chapter 1 . 10/3/2011 Yes! I love what-if stories in which Aang does not survive, and you pull off your situation with aplomb. You really know how to write Zuko, because I can imagine everything he says and does and thinks to actually happen in canon. Nice work! The last line was a perfect conclusion. (LOL at your AN.) |
FirePony16 chapter 1 . 5/7/2011 Sad and beautiful. :) |
X59 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011 Really good. Not nice that you killed off Aang though, but thats life. |
sleepings chapter 1 . 9/16/2010 LAGJALGJL SO SAD OMFG. Beautiful, though. ;-; |