Please please please come back and continue this story I know it's been years but please come back

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Please please please continue

Please update soon. I would love to know how this story ends.

Love this chapter! Hilarious! Pregnant Jude is funny

I know you haven't posted on this in a while but please finish

FIN?

i have lived reading your story. its so full of emotions, passion, and wonderfulness. not sure if you eever plan to finish this story, but i would love to read the rest.

WHen is Tommy going to man up.

That is so sad.

I Love this Story can't wait for more.

hey i noticed you havnt updated lately ! and i really want to know the ending ...!...so maybe you could plz update for me! : ( (puppy dog face)

if youre too busy i understand...

thanxz a million,

kristen123

It's a really good story I like it but the grammar could use some work and you have a lot of typos as well which makes it really hard to read. Other than that I like it.

Really good first chapter.

First of all, I am so glad that you put up a new chapter. I was really happy!

I'd like to point out a few things I noticed, though. :) I was scared to death that Ashlynne was going to kidnap Mac throughout the entire chapter. I thought Tommy was crazy for letting a girl who had just lost her own baby watch HIS baby. Hope that makes sense. I'm glad that didn't happen, but it would have made quite the turn of events... lol!

Secondly, I'd like to remind you that when a new person talks, you need to start a new paragraph. You seem to be doing it sporadically and it's hard to read sometimes.

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. :)