The reason you don't have a lot of reviews is because only stupid mindless sappy idiots are reading the story . It is full of idiotic , unrealistic scenes .. ANBU crying , shouting , breaking protocol left and right , what is this a CIRCUS ? Lee ANBU captain ? What happens when he faces Advanced genjutsu- Teammate comes to get him out and dies .. Don't make me laugh with your crew of Eagle Squad .. Apart From temari and kiba and tenten , the rest are a JOKE ! ANBU are spec ops , silent assassins, complete mission objectives and come out , in fact in any spec ops tier one or not , you follow chain of command , you do not break protocol and squabble like children on a picnic. There are plans and contingencies .. Sakura here is an idiotic FANGIRL, arent ANBU supposed to be emotionally conditioned ? Sakura in ANBU screaming for sasuke to come back .. Sounds like a sappy emo angst filled story .. Please do a little more research into what differentiates Special Forces Detachments from regular troops . THIS is more like a loud rambunctious high school party . You can write fiction as much as you want , but you have to ground things in reality when you write about elements like ANBU which are modeled on real world Special Operations Forces , since the fundamental principles remain same .

I like your story but your writing is weird. As in, the way the lines are formed

I will continue reading, though

I absolutely love this story. I think you did an incredible job writing it and an excellent job of executing your idea. From the beginning I was pulled into the story and was compelled to read the wonderful tale that you had spun. I loved how you presented all of the characters and although I wasn't fond of your OC's at first, over time I grew to like them. I liked your OC's so much in fact that I kept on hoping that Lee would choose Mine-chan over Sakura. Awesome job on depicting the fight scenes too.
You are an incredible writer and although the story was never finished, I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciated the story that you did write.

A truly incredible fic, possibly the best Naruto fic I've ever read. The writing style flows well, your OC's are well rounded and believable and you've really captured a sense of first world war terror in a Naruto format. The scene with Kakashi near the end of the last chapter was quite priceless and truly in character. You're gotten Lee and Hinata perfect, and you've portrayed their struggles in such a moving way. I can't wait to hear more.
You have some incredible talent, when you get the chance or inspiration to do another chapter you will find an eager reader In me.

Merry Christmas

RFRG

your story sounds like an interesting read, but the way the sentences are broken of at the middle, like you used unneccesarely enters instead, makes it to hard to read.

If you could fix that? Please send me a messedge if you have found the problem and corrected it so I can read it :D

srr u dont get any reviews but honestly, this is probably the most epic story ive ever read in my 14 year old life. .RESPECT.

okay i don't know if i will read this story but tell me, is lee still unable to use chakra in your story?

coz if he is then let me know what he'll do if he needs to break a genjutsu, counter elemental/highly destructive jutsus? if you compare this to real life, no matter how good you are at fighting hand to hand if you're outnumbered or say your opponent has a gun then you're dead.

I love and admire how much information you use from the manga to blend with your own ideas to make such a great ff! I personally like how much characterization and personality you give Tenten because I love her!

I think you really worked hard on this. I like how much information of the manga that you put in it and how in tuned to the characters you are. Also how descriptive you are, it shows me how much you love Naruto. I personally have been trying to create a plot for a Naruto FF, in particular a NejiTen. Well done! I love it already! Even if the chapters are long(LOL)!

hey I hope things are going better for you now than when your cousin posted this chap

I really enjoyed reading this story and hope you decide to continue it

feel better soon :)

I FREAKIN LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!

the first chapter was kinda confusing with the codenames and whatnot, but now that I know who's who it's great. not that it wasn't great before :D

Well, I like the concept, and the POV- I love to root for

Lee. What had me scratching my head though, was why Naruto

of all people was being kept back from the action. I mean,

Mr. One-Man-Army didn't even make a single Kage Bunshin. I

expect that you were trying to make a distinction between

being ANBU on a mission, and a "normal ninja" in the case

of Sakura and Naruto, and that elites of that level wouldn't

want non-team members messing up their coordination. It still

seems like a serious waste of resources, and putting ANBU unecessarily further at peril. Keeping Sakura back makes sense,

once Team 7's mission had failed (again.._ P) because she's primarily a Medic Nin, and thus a precious resource, despite the

massive damage she can dish out. I could see that keeping Naruto out of it, flashy as he is, would make breaking contact with the enemy easier, but it certainly would have cleared the enemy out

a lot faster. Especially, since Kage Bunshin aren't line-of-sight limited in their actions- ie. Naruto doesn't have to conciously keep track of them, So Naruto makes Henged Bunshins, they charge the enemy, and everyone runs away. _

And Lee can still do his "forlorn hope". _

Matt-kun! Come back to me! I MISS YOU SO MUCH! It's been YEARS!

Hey Kano, in Japan he is Maito Gai, Dubbers here changed it to Might Guy, ok?

I've read ur story and all u do is making me always want to know what happened next! Your storyline is great! I'd never read a really good story 'bout rock lee,but this one is amazing!

Oh yeah,for the woman who slapped Lee earlier,can u slap her back for me? Say it's from me..

On top of that,really nice work u've done! I cant wait to read more!

Keep up the goodwork!

.inuzuka fuko