Reviews for Adding insult to injury
kimbclar chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
Excellent
themergitonian chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Good story
blah chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
this was lovely 3 I adore your hhr stories :)
Hmseneca chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
I usually dont like Harry/Hermione, but this is comendable. Good job!
Jlee93 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Very cute and sweet :) Great job!
Katie chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
It was good but you spelled the word practicing wrong. You spelled it with an S instead of C
harrypotterfan chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
go back to the part where you are talking about them looking for material on horcruxes. you put preteens but i think that you really mean pretense. sorry if i'm wrong!
pstibbons chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
Ignore the flames - this was a nice fic, and I've C2ed it.
anonamis chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
u couldent have gone any further:(
Raven's Dragon chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Very Cute!
Yeah chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
he said with chuckle attempting to imagine learning how to play music, or draw art from a text

Most people do Learn how to Play Music or Draw from a Book, I've done both.

This was posted before on a different screen name so I'm not so sure it's yours.
readbeforeyouwrite chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
OH I LOVE IT! THAT SO CUTE!
fifespice chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
aww so cute shew as willing to learn to fly for ahrry actually its a good job its harry and b not ron she loves seeing as ron is an insensititve jerk
Hopeful Obsessions chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Heehee. I really liked this alot. It was adorable!

Your writing has a whole bunch of lines and expressions that are absolutely amazing. I wish I could write the same way! In fact, I have just started writing my first Harry/Hermione fanfiction and would love it if you would return the favor and review my story as well. It's called 'Where I Belong'.

Keep writing and I'm definately going to read your other stuff as well. Great work!
alayneni chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Great story. I saw two errors this is one of them "gasping at the nasty bruise blue and purple bruise that had formed" One the words "bruise" needs to come out.

As for the tub scene maybe you could write it. You could have them soaking in the prefects' bathroom. They don't have to be naked. Hermione could be in her bra and panty and Harry in his boxers. He could just sort of hold her in the tub. She could lean against him for support. It would be cute. Then after they leave. And this is most important. SHE HEXES RON REALLY BADLY.

HOpe you decide to write a sequel.
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