Not bad. Very quick to the conclusion and everything wrapped up in a nice little bow. I liked the chemical aspect and how Digger explained the hide-out. But it was a little too neat. Still pretty good though, and I liked 'hearing' their voices as they talked in my head.

Hey !

I just wanted to thank you for writing a JD fanfic... There is none in French and not so many in English... So... I had to say thanks.

The show is gone for at least four or five years in France (they try to rerun it after the succes of Prison Break but it last only six episodes) so I was not able to see the mistakes you may have did.

As Emily said it's a little rushed and I don't really like the idea of the drug. But I think that Theresa's death, even if a bit frustrating, is totaly in the show's spirit : We never get answers. I'm also really happy for Digger's clearance. I remember how learning that he was a bad guys upseted me.

Even if apparently it was a mistake I liked the fact that you bring Karen (or her cat) in the story... It was my favourite character...

Well I may be a little late for this review but I hope you'll read it... To know that your not the only one to watched and liked (or loved) the show.

Emilie

Not a bad story. I'm happy to see a few people have written continuations to the cliffhanger-which I just watched today. It's a shame to see such a good show cancelled, especially when I've *just* gotten hooked on the SciFi reruns even though I knew it was going to end. Anyway, there were a few continuity mistakes-for instance, John doesn't own Karen's cat anymore; he gave it to Delphine at the end of "Psychic Connection." Another thing: I was very disappointed to see Theresa die after John had worked so hard to find her at all costs. And though I'm *very* glad you cleared Digger, I think it seemed a bit too *neat*, you know? You tied up all the loose ends in a short story and it seemed a bit rushed. All that aside, I'm glad you decided to post this-I already miss JD!

Emily