Brava, dear, brava

Wow. Just wow. Beautifully written and beautifully heart-breaking. I just love the line 'But that is alright because it has to be alright'. Just wonderfully written.

wow you are just amazing wow that is all i have to say you left me speechless this is far best one of the most amazing pieces of writing i have read in my whole entire life. just got to say congrats on making this beautiful masterpiece

i have a sudden urge to watch the Moulin Rouge, I seriously love this oneshot.

Very poetic. Really good writing.

You captured the characters, mood, and settings perfectly! I feel bad for Kyouya though...

This story honestly gives me chills every time I read it. You're writing stlye is fluid and graceful and the characterization is flawless. The last few lines are especially powerful, you really captured a fascinating undercurrent to this show. Beautiful work.

- J

very good!

I have to say I'm -very- impressed. I could envision every step of the way-and the underlying messages in these lines were exciting to interpret.

For a first time handling of Ouran you certainly had your characterizations in place.

Amazing wordplay.

Great idea, really well executed, loved it :)

Now this is VERY interesting in a good way. WHOA

That was a great take on the structure of the Host Club... I liked it ]

Amazing Kyouya characterization! I just loved this story. it was short, but it got its point across beautifully. And! It was tremendously fun!

wow- i loved the idea for this, it was really different