| Reviews for A Secret Place |
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   kandita chapter 1 . 7/14/2016 Very nice |
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 4/4/2014 Oohh... That was Cute...! The moment were Great! Liked it! XD |
| amba gurl chapter 1 . 11/18/2012 awesome story :) i just love all these little ficlets! |
| GreenCAT the second chapter 1 . 8/9/2012 LUFFY IS SO CUTE! |
| Everythinganime14 chapter 1 . 1/25/2012 Omg, sequal? I would absolutely love that! 3 |
| Akiry chapter 1 . 8/12/2011 *Favourites the story immediately after reading this* Once again, you're writing style is very intriguing and I think you got the personalities right on :) Once again, I'm also slightly disappointed the little number of reviews. |
| apannah chapter 1 . 11/10/2009 i love how you got the characters well! i hate it how in some fan fictions luffy only stands in the back round yelling " nii-san! nii-san!" this story got them both in the spotlight in a postitive way! perfect! |
| Butterfree chapter 1 . 7/16/2009 As usual, it was cool and sweet You write a younger Ace very well; Luffy I'm not too sure about. Though, we haven't seen much of younger Luffy either and your version of him seems quite believable. Except maybe when he wasn't encouraged to save himself until he saw his brother there. Even if it is when he was seven, I'd imagine he's attempt to even without Ace. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Manga-Fanatic chapter 1 . 6/25/2009 I really like this story! :D I would love it if you made a sequel! The story is written really well and I think you capture the relationship between Ace and Luffy really well! I really enjoyed reading this story, it's so cute how Ace gets all worried for Luffy! :D Awesome story! |
| penny chapter 1 . 4/29/2009 Great story! Ace-chan and Luffy-chan is so cute! Yeah, I always thought Ace takes after his father more,a more reasonable and intelligent kind of guy. |
| Rumble Fan chapter 1 . 3/29/2009 This more than deserves a sequel. Luffy at seven, learning how to control his...ABILITIES is kinda funny. |
| AUehara chapter 1 . 12/6/2008 this was nice! I liked! everything for the little brother... it's so cute and beauty! I love this family's love P it's just too pretty. |
| Eternal Dumas chapter 1 . 11/21/2008 Not only is this story extremely well-written, but the way you protrayed both the ten-year-old Ace and seven-year-old Luffy is also exceptional. You managed to capture the bond that they share as brothers perfectly. I'm all for a sequel here if only because I want to read more of Ace and Luffy's interactions together as children. Keep up the good work! |
| catgrl106 chapter 1 . 11/13/2007 This is such an awesome story! Are you still planning on writing the sequel to this? 'cause I think that would be awesome! |
| tkaa chapter 1 . 8/24/2007 this was a really awsome story u should make a sequel. |
