| Reviews for Dabazi |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2014 no cool |
 KShara Khan chapter 1 . 10/31/2010 Now this is interesting, instead of Timon and Pumba finding Simba this other lion finds him. That's good, keep it going. |
| Seceret chapter 1 . 5/27/2002 Wow I like it so far. Please continue. |
| MBooker chapter 1 . 11/29/2001 Good story. I hope you continue it. |
| sdfgsdfgsgdf chapter 1 . 11/13/2001 Purr... I loved it! Real great characterizations and a magnificent plot1 Encore, encore! I hope you upload s'more soon! |
| Kiva chapter 1 . 9/22/2001 Exelent story! I doubt many people cold do as good. I cant wait for the next part. |
| Holly Holiday chapter 1 . 7/19/2001 lol poor Dabazi. hes so cutteee! i wanna be a lion... |
| Xianamagus chapter 1 . 6/3/2001 Are you kidding? That just made me more hungrey for your stories! They're really good and i am anxious for more of your works... thats all for now! |
| Nyekundu chapter 1 . 5/29/2001 Well, for a short story this was rather creative. It fits in nicely with the actual tale of the Lion King, and the plot was truly unique. I'd say the same also for your other short work, "Goodbye" on Brian Tiemann's site (otherwise known as , of course). The only thing that I could honestly criticize was the fact that it ended too quickly...I would have loved to have learned more about the characters and their individual I suppose you could take that as a compliment seeing as I wanted to read more of your writing. |
