great story! all the details are perfect, and i love the way the whole piece flows! excellent job, and i hope to see more stories from you!

This is my first fanfic, so I'm a little nervous. It's a very well worn topic: Michelle & Tony's first kiss. Please read & review. Thanks!

ok to say it was your first fanfic - its fantastic. And to tell you the truth ive never read a tony and michelles first kiss fanfic, but ive read billions of tony and michelle post season 2 fics, they never ever get old! which by the way i think you should carry this on to a post season 2 fic! great stuff!