This should be under humer not drama

Yeah this is a little messed up :) the way they act

I actually really like this story, I mean so what if there are a few spelling errors, your still a brilliant writer. I would also like to suggest maybe getting a beta reader, I know a few that are really good that I can suggest for you.

I really hope you continue to update this :)

I'm so glad I found this story, to think I was just typing in my name to see what came up.

Hope to see an Update soon :)

~Jessica :)

(Meh. Too lazy to log in.)

Great story, btw! (My user's Sabrina-Princess of Mount Olympus)

waa this is so good i dont know what ppl see bad about it! Its such a smart story otherwise everyone just uses the same old plot this is so unique :'( dont stop please! this is amazing i love it please update soon!

i'm 13 yrs old and have great grammer so I must admit that I am a bit offended. but ANYWAYS for a 12 yr old I thought it was a good job

i think what is weird about this story i got a cousin with the name Jessica Rose.

I love this story...but I wish you would write more. I've never been able to finish it!

I wrote a story similar to this, and whoa i was 12 too. I will not share the details for fear that i havent posted it yet and someone might copy it. In mine peter also took the twin, but Voldemort wasnt back yet nor could he speak by the way.

Good begining though. Chou!

You'd better update.

WITH CHAPTERS THAT ARE 10 PAGES LONG!

i like it is that the end

Please repost and update soon!

EW! It sounded like it was going to be a good story but i had to exit coz its just to gross for my taste!

Love the story line; well what i thought it would be... but eew did you have to add in the whole lucious thing?

Gross...

Aw Jessie. Stupid damn flamers. Can't wait for the rewrite

ok i will watch for the reposting of this story and i cant wait for it was really good.