Love the story!

Cuuuuteee!

I love this story and I love your writing. I'm looking forward to reading all your fics!

so good. :)

Awwwww LOVE IT! The way you added prof. X in there was really good. I feel sad for Mystique though.

This is a beautiful, full bodied story. I find it absolutely touching. Your characterisation was phenomenal, and I particularly loved your portrayal of the bond between Marie and Erik. Despite the odds, they seemed to fit together so well. You have a wonderful style of writing.

This story is an epic win! keep up the great work.

This was great. I love the AU you invented. I like how you made Wolverine and Pryo friends with Rogue.

very good! whana reade more about it.. so please hurry up.. )

I love it! I really do. You have a wonderful writing style. The only problem I have with it is Marie's accent. LOL. But I'm an uprooted Southerner. LOL.

I liked how gentle Erik was. I always read these stories where he's, though befitting, a sadistic b*stard... in a sense. So the way you portrayed him was like a breath of cool fresh air. It seemed very much like him too, just a few more twists here and a small dab of spit shine there and it'll be spotless and perfect.

Oh, and one other thing, this doesn't seem very Pyro to me: "Someone! Come quickly! She's awake!"

It's the 'come quickly' part, I can't seem him using that good of grammar... LOLOLOL.

But other than that, it was Suh-Wheat and, like I said, a breath of sweet cool fresh air.

Since you're a M/R fan, there's a community at dubbed demented_allure. It's a wonderful M/R community that you might enjoy, if you don't already know about it yet _

Keep up the good work!

Okay...this is weird. I only read about half of it when I gave up out of sheer confusion. Your writing style is wonderful-but all I could think in my reading was "what the hell?" We need some kind of explination about this AU world. How did things come to be this way? It feels like it was plucked out of a much bigger storyline that we know nothing about. So my suggestion would be to (at the very least) include some sort of backstory/summary at the beginning. Please keep writing, cause you really do have a great style.

BRILLIANT! Thank you for posting erik/rogue, my favourite. Please continue this story -Choccy Chip

Cool. Nice one shot. Very nice.

Hey

I really enjoyed your fic. It was well written and flowed nicely.

I hope you write some more.

Jo