Bitch this story is lame you need to fix this lame ass peace of shit

That stuck up jerk, she deserves wayy better!

your plot snf chsrscter developement aren't very well thought out, are they?

if you still around.i like you to know that i like this story then the other "unlucky-in your dreams revised".i hope you continue this story.

Overall good plot and structure, but this Kags sounds like a total bitchy crybaby... _ Ah, who cares, I still love it. :) Next time, add a teeny bit more detail.

-Goose [0]

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

add more chapters please

keep up the good work

i really don't like her attitude, kagome seems too much like the bratty litle girl wit the way she treats everyone.

i feel like slaping her lol.

all in all good story, ould use a bit more developpment but the concept is exellent.

good luck

Umm I ReKon ThiZ StoRy Iz AlrIght

BuT WHeN KaGoMe CaMe Bak FroM US?

U ShoUlDa MaDe HeR BaD Or SuMFin XD

BuT WaTeVeR StiLL AlRigHT XD

Your right. Britney is a classic. I wonder though. Who yelled hobo?

i like it and i hope u update soon!

can you make your chapters longer please

ah she will always love him thats so sweet

ok whats going on