AHHHHHHHHHHH INCREDIBLE i got so caught up reading this, i sort of imagined i was Storch just hiding inside the closet watching it all unfold lol

yes, i enjoyed reading about Riza's side! loved it! i am nervous about Storch in the closet though AHHHHH

️ i'm supposed to be working right now, but heck - i'm trapped binge-reading this again hahahahha i love it so much (if my emojis at the start don't show up, i'm sorry. i'm running out of words to tell you how much i love your work. hopefully this site allows emojis lol)

nothing but love for you and your work

HAHAHHAA okay the part about the couch was a nice reprieve from the heaviness of their situation

LOVE IT, as always

This chapter was incredible. My god... The suspense was really good. It kept me on the edge of my seat. When I started reading this fic I thought it was just going portray the scenes of fmab woth different perspective and with the twist of roy and riza's marriage and a few other scenes. I didn't think you would create such intricate plot. To be honest, the first few chapters were a bit shaky and slow paced in my opinion. But as I kept reading I only saw you progressing. The current arc is filler but the way you're filling the gaps of brotherhood is really interesting. I enjoyed this fic very much. Plz keep writing

I love Royai and I definitely don't condone infidelity, but honestly Roy hasn't been the best hubby lately that I just love that my girl Riza is getting appreciation. I'm here for the drama. I cannot stop reading, good job!

Good story man

Keep writing this story please! Royai is such a great pairing.

This story is lit, I read the whole thing in 2 days. This is THE royai fic.

I can appreciate what you want to do with this, but it feels rushed. I get that they're married before the start of the series in this fic, but my personal opinion is that it would be duty over relationship, and I could never really see Hawkeye comforting Mustang with a kiss while they're technically on duty, and especially not in uniform with the chance of the driver of the cart seeing them. Too risky for a secretly married military couple. Where something like that would have been more appropriate would actually be back at the inn away from prying eyes. I won't lie, the sex also seems a little out of place, especially after what the two have come across. Two boys no older than 11 just tried, and spectacularly failed to bring a human being to life, I'm sure the most Roy would have asked for was a loving embrace, that would have likely been a haunting image for them. Your idea is really unique, and it could be fun to see the lengths these two go to hide their relationship, I just think it needs a little bit of tweaking.

This chapter was so good! I’m super excited to see where the story goes from here, Riza definitely is in a tough spot!

Beatiful

Hi !
Je suis contente que tu poste à nouveau.
Pauvre Riza. Bradley est vraiment un enfoiré.

OMG! The wait was good! I was missing you! Please keep it as you can! I’m dying of nerves! Thank you!