This was really good. They both were human. Harry acted how most kids would going through that situation, as did Sirius. Thank you so much for making them normal!

Since I was really thrilled with each chapter, one can say that I really enjoyed reading this story. I liked how much detail you put into the characters of the gang so that the whole story seemed much more authentic and the fact that you revealed what happened between Harry and Mauricio only step by step made the whole thing even more exciting. Oh, and by the way, I loved your characterisation of Sirius. He was so cool with his motorcycle and his way of dealing with Harry.

I love this story and how you potrayed Sirius and Harry. Lots of spelling and grammar mistakes which was a huge downside. It made it hard to read. But I did get the gist of it and the story was great.

I actually think it ended nicely. I don't think you need a sequel at all.

I absolutely loved reading this! Wonderful writing!

Nice story. I really liked it.

Really Cute story! nicely wriiten too! defo going in my faves!

i like this story, it's different and great

This was a great story. I will check the sequel out but usually I'm not one for sequels. We'll see though. :)

Not bad .

Good story, thanks for sharing!

I really liked this story, great job!

Excellent story. You've done a great job with it. I'm looking forwards to the sequel.

Hi. nice job! Keep it up.

great story