I took your fic to portray snap-shot of Harry's life via Dumbledore while at Hogwarts, as Lily, James, Sirius, and Remus watched on...more would be nice, though I think it would be a good idea to flesh any additional chapters out, so that it is less "implied."

If I've read your fic wrong, I apologize. I would be interested to read more.

Best,

Varity Sinning