Okay, you lost me after the part where Bobby leaves the training room-what happened?

Again, excellent and I cannot wait for this to continue. The Peter/Kitty relationship is adorable, on the verge of heartbreakingly sweet when you speak about his family (that toy tiger made my heart almost burst with the adorableness). I also much appreciate that, unlike many, you have not taken the Kitty is evil and Rogue must hate her approach but instead been far more sympathetic to the characters. Very enjoyable, and I hope to read more soon!

This particular story out of all the ones you've written, has a very different feel to it. In some ways it seems like I'm getting to know Kitty and Peter for the very first time.

Some scenes however felt familiar. The moment where Kitty and Peter are discussing Illyana, and the mention of "Zsa-Zsa". Oh dear, lol. That name was SO appropriate. However it hurts just a little bit thinking that Peter cheated on Kitty willingly. I wish we could have delved a bit more into how it happened and why.

You bring up a VERY important point. In canon, Claremont has had Kitty tease Peter by calling him a "dunce" or a "dummy". I can think of three separate instances right off the top of my head. To this day I'm left wondering why, and I think it's interesting that you touch upon this.

Kitty's fears of having sex too soon with Peter, will hopefully be unfounded. The idea of this is brought up, but unfortunately we will never know how it ends. I'd like to think that Peter learned a lesson from the breakup, so Kitty won't be feeling pressured. Boy aughta be damn grateful!

- cute. Cool play on words. Nekochan - more cute. :) Pasha, huh? Aw. Somehow that just feels very believable to me. A sensitive person like Peter SHOULD grow up having his very own stuffed Siberian tiger.

Very surprised by Danger's appearance. And I loved it. Her last line gave me some goose bumps. Looks like we're left with a bit of a cliffhanger ending to your story, but I thought it was engrossing.

Um its good apart from the fact u finished it lyk in 2 chappies... good tho so well done

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Very, very good and quite realistic. Y'know, I enjoy the Piotr/Kitty fanfics about them getting together after the Alcatraz fiasco, but I liked this because it accurately portrayed a relationship between the two prior to X3. They were on the same team together, after all.

I liked the Bobby/Rogue too, and I don't even like that couple. It was very honest, and not as sugar-coated as we're going to see of X3 fanfiction.

More, More, More?

I really liked this, mostly because you made the characters so human. I loved the ending, with all the different possibilities it could lead to. Also, was the novelization any good? I haven't read it, though I did see the film (which was good even if Colossus just got to stand there and look tough). Another great story, thanks.

Once again you have managed to take the title as the best author upon fanfic, not to mention one of the few to continue Kiotr fics. It is off to a wonderful start and I cannot wait to read on with the next installment.

OOh.

Actually, this fits really well with the continuity of the movie, as well as I can remember. Like, the novelization of X-2 had many differences so a lot of stories written from the novel and not the movie were a little distressingly off.

I must ask you though, was the novellization good? See, I'm a broke college student who can barely afford food let alone books so I have to make purchases very wisely.

Without trying to spoil anything about the movie for you... I was very disappointed because they didn't really include too much of Piotr in it. (I think he only had like two lines...) So does the novellization contain more of him? (It's so sad when they put so much Halle Berry in the movie because she whined about not having so big of a part in the last 2, and then she doesn't do anything with the big part, when they could easily let the spotlight shine on an awesome character like Colossus).

Did you invent the Massachusettes Academy thing or did it happen in the book? I'm very curious.

And I can totally see Piotr having a stuffed tiger. I love that. hee hee.