this is really good. I honestly never would have found it though if I hadn't read A Pleasure by deceptive lies. that book really got me to read crossovers between naruto and Harry Potter and this is definitely one of the better written ones.

Ahhh just noticed something rereading this wonderful chapter. Naruto's birthday is in October, not August

This was a very good story and I was so relieved that it wasn't a Sasuke and Sakura pairing or a Naruto and Sakura pairing. I enjoy stories without pairings very much

this story was amazing

am I the only one who pictured Itachi with somewhat of a wise old British accent

started laughing at the Voldemort part then I saw
: he'd kill anyone who laughed at him
and instantly shut up trying not to burst out laughing again

Great job

Oh, and I learned so many Japanese curse words! Always a good skill to curse in multiple languages.

Thank you for the story and for keeping it to twelve chapters. Sometimes I don't want to read a book. I know a lot more could have been covered, but keeping to story line to basically the brotherly relationship between Naruto and Sasuki was refreshing. A happy AU for those two. Thanks again.

holy jesus i love this fic so much, i love fics where Naruto and Sasuke are close friends, almost brothers. the fics where theyre constantly bashing on Sasuke or Sakura or Kakashi arent bad, it just doesnt sit right with me. I love how well you depicted the twos relationship, them constantly bickering at each other while also knowing their boundaries. I know this fic is pretty old but thanks for writing this!

This was a very nicely written story. It was hilarious and I liked the AU Naruto world. I loved how you portrayed the characters and how you constructed the storyline. My only problem was Voldemort. I know that the appearance of the ANBU as guards may be intimidating and would make anyone wary but Voldemort seemed too mild and weak. This was the man who had 99% of the wizard of population scared stiff. His plans have been thwarted many times before but he always retaliated with fury, not fear. He would torture or even kill the people who brought him bad news. Even when Harry was going around destroying his horcruxes. He didn't just sit and frown with his non-existent brows furrowed in concern, he flipped and murdered and tortured almost everyone in sight. And while we're on that topic, what happened there? What happened with the horcruxes? Did they get destroyed? Did they all disappear or did they just not exist. Also, in the beginning there was a lot about Umbridge, but after the paint incident, she just vanished from the storyline. Same with DA. I was kinda looking forward to them hopefully popping in on the DA lessons and giving pointers and advice and stuff. I mean if they were guarding Harry 24/7 they would have most definitely been there for DA, yet after that short speech, it wasn't even mentioned. And there was no explanation on how Sirius survived, or how he found konoha, which was supposed to be sealed off to the rest of the world, or how he got the funds to hire the most powerful shinobi in the whole village, for a whole year on top of that too. And why had Harry moved to konoha, when he was just finished with his sixth year and needed to go back the next year. And not to mention, there was no mention about the slytherins, about malfoy or any problems with them. And what happened to Dumbledore? Why is McGonnigal in charge? Ok, maybe I found more than one problem. There are quite a bit of holes that need to be filled up. I apologize if you find this offensive, I didn't mean to be rude or too harsh. Although I admit that I may have been overly critical, I just meant to give feedback. Overall, you did a great job. I really did enjoy reading this fic. Thank you and keep up the good work!

Hermoine is being an insolent brat when someone kindly hints at someone to back off they do as told. It is not her buisness to divulge in the secrets of Naruto, Sasuke nor any other shinobi.

I like your twist of Sasuke asking Naruto for help and them defeating Orochimaru together. Fugaku cutting down Mikoto seems like a more tragic twist. I like how Ron gets Go so he has fun watching them play it.

Actually, I am surprised no one freaked out over Harry's ANBU guards since I was expecting someone to scream Death Eaters! or something. I don't know if it will be happening but I want to see Naruto and Sasuke's reaction to Harry speaking Parseltongue.

Ending with the line from the random ghost was on point haha

("At least /their/ not with Voldemort," Naruto murmured back before turning his attention to the horse-men, "Naruto and Sasuke. That is all we will tell you without leave of our superiors and the signer of the Contract,") they're

The spar was nicely choreographed. Naruto ninja battles and Yu-Gi-Oh disc fights are definitely at the top of fun things to watch if they ever happened in real life.

(Naruto had made himself at /him/ in the quaint house, ignoring Petunia's complaint's and Vernon's threats as he kicked up his /heals/ in the living room to watch TV or commandeered the kitchen in a misguided attempt to make breakfast.) home , heels

Naruto traipsing about the house with his foxes trailing him paints a cute picture. Woah, what the heck Sasuke. You should feel like slamming your head against the table, you heel :-(