Man...I haven't reviewed your first story in the series. Well, I can say some stuff about the next one here right? Well anyway, I think this story is a lot better than the next one. This is probably only because it's not as long and confusing. Well, I'm going to continue reading your next book to find out what happens. Keep up the good work.

i know you have heard this before but the chapters are short

but i won't let that bother me, its still a great story

outstanding work

Kind of a short chapter to begin with, but it's solidly written and fairly compelling. So far, I endorse this event or product.

a blue ruby is a sapphire. they are the same stone, just different colors. if you mean blue ruby, that's a sapphire

Hm...i've decided to read thr prequel...(I started reading the sequel to this first) and I have on complaint...It's...Too...Short.

For chapters this small, in order to make a decent size story, you'd probably have to have 50 chapters!

Anyway...I really hope the sequel is longer...

Nevertheless; *Story Faved*

That was seriously intense. Great CHAPTERS!

Sorry I couldn't review for the last couple of chapters. It was filled with suspense to me.

The last couple of chapters were great. Need I say more?

Hey! I've got this game too! I even got up to the part where it reveals Tetra being Zelda! This is so freakin' cool! Great story, as always.

You made the Hero of Time a jackass in here.

So the stoey is over?

Make the chapters longer!

Make the chapters longer!

You're makin the true Link the hero of time Link a jackass.

More plz post more!