Really good story

You did a really good job continuing this story, and though it might sound callous, I don't think Piratess could have done better. It seemed like there was a marked, noticeable improvement in story quality after you took it over. I'm not saying Piratess was a bad author, quite the opposite in fact. I honestly thought the story was good in its early chapters, but you managed to take it to the next level.

TLDR, Kudos to both of you for this wonderful story.

Hi, Zaratan ! I would like to ask if I could translate your fiction in French... Because I love it !
I really like deathfics, but I don't find a lots... Can I translate this One pleeeeeeeaaase ?

I'm guessing that Michaela is just a kid and can't get 'poltergeist' right. Nice wordplay, poultry-ghost had me laughing for at least 15 minutes. Is this your input or the original? I didn't read that, because this review in coming in years after the completion as it is. Either way, it's good :)

Now, Drakken and Shego would be most likely, anyone could see that. Just... They've had their moments to the point where I can't see them flat out having her killed. 'sides, Ron was right. That's not flashy enough in their standards.

Oh! I know why this is familiar-Ever read the Mediator by Meg Cabot? Dead Jesse meets Susannah and they fall in love and he comes back to life and dot dot dot. Thanks for the mercy, Quel

Oh come on! *yells at story,* Rufus is smarter than that! I mean, he's the one who has spelled stuff out for Ron with sauce packets and nachos! Geez!

Great chap.

Quel

I'm not gonna comment on the main stuff, it's great an' all. Makes me sad. :/ hey, I haven't split a tear yet! Consider that a challenge!

Anyways, it makes me happier to know that Ron still has his moments sometimes. Then, being the part time HP freak that I am, I keep reading "Miller" as "Skeeter", talk about nutty ladies. :)

Can't wait to see where this goes, signed Quel

How...startling.

A wonderful story.

so to whoever wrote this chapter...

intense and angsty! started out so well... nice. I'll be day dreaming about this now, I'lkl try to read the next on e but might not get to it until tomorrow

i really liked ur story.
the part where ron got alive again (man that sounds weird) really cought me off guard.
the characters where well done and there was a good mix of humor/romance/weirdnes.
a good story indeed

holy freakin cow. i just realized how many chapters there are left to read.

... that makes it all the more better.

Whoo! Ghost reference/cameo! XD

Aw... this was a really cute chapter... I LOVE YOU!

YES! FINALLY!

I was waiting for it. I was ANTICIPATING it! And now it's here, the turning point of the story! WHOO! I LOVE ghosts!

Hehe... Rita Miller. I knew this was based off of Ghost. Hooray for me!

Hooray for YOU for putting this story up!