I want more... why did you end before the smex?

LOL, this was great!

Dat twas awesome *talks like retard* lol but I'm not here to flame u but I was a bit dissapointed, but the part with dem and saix gave me a mental nosebleed, in other languages I luved it.

Please don't end it there! T.T

I love it! gosh I have a sick mind still it ade me smile

'-'

...That's a rather terrible place to leave off at... but oh well... some things just can't be helped. :3

Loved it! XD

*holds up knife* com here little girl... so i can effing GUT u 4 not finishing tat yaoi!

grrr u make me angrey

lawl XD Axels awsome ahhahaahaha good job XD

:O I FREAKIN LOVED IT! Great story! Axel and Roxas ROCK!

Axel is a true pervert...the idea was great and i liked the story thanks for writing it

I'm really goin'to kil ya!Ya cut the best part!Yeah teh fangirls are perverts!

haha, Axel's so evil for that

*shanks author* That was for ending it there.

WHOA!

Now I don't think I can ever look at a popcicle the same again...that's not a bad thing though...XD

Great spelling and grammar. Some fics I've read are so confusing I have to go through It twice to understand!

Oh, and I totally lmao'd at Demyx and Saix...uh,,making noises? lol

I was wonering as well why it was supposed to be a perfect popsicle *huge grin*

Very well planned!