It’s a great story!

Ah, this story brings back memories! IT was this one that got me into Supernatural in the first place!

Loved the story, the characters, and the hilariousness. Great job!

Oh my goodness, this was a fantastic ride! I can't remember the last time I was entertained by a story like this. I'm glad everyone is alive and I hope Caleb takes advantage of his second chance at life because I'm sure there won't be another one. Don't mess with the dark side, they did not have cookies.

And the ending was so fitting! Dean would steal Scott's card. Lol And of course the Tracy's would install a GPS tracker on Dean's baby. I wonder what kind of other crazy adventures they could go on together. Good times, I'm sure. Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story. :)

P.S.
"It should be noted that payback is a bitch and the first resort of any self respecting older brother. Which was why, as Dean screamed down the highway at 250 mph and Sam just screamed, they were overtaken by a long, blue streak of light that was travelling much, much faster. Scott could never resist making a point."

This was hilarious! Poor Sam. Haha

O.O

I don't have the words to describe how much I enjoyed this chapter. Everything was on point! Jeff kicked ass just like everyone else and it was glorious! I'm glad Scott arrived in time, I wouldn't be able to handle any of our boys dying. And the doctor! Haha I like him. Hopefully he'll take care of Sammy otherwise Dean might have a problem with him. Ah, this was so satisfying. I feel kinda bad for Caleb but we all pay for our sins sooner or later. Tsk, tsk.

Poor Scott, he really does suffer a lot. This is such a great read I can't put my phone down. My eyes hurt as well as my head but here I am still reading. That's a compliment by the way, this is really good. :)

Damn, damn it! Why must you keep me awake at this godforsaken hour? This is so good! Gordon and John sneaking out made me chuckle and I know Scott will not be a happy camper when he finds out he was left behind. Lol Then, the talk between John and Alan...gold! It was such a cute and tender moment which was, of course, ruined by something. Oh, and Jeff being kidnapped? What the hell is going on?

Ooh my gosh! I should really be sleeping since I have to wake up in...a couple of hours but I can't stop reading! I like how Scott and Dean fought then you have Sam and Virgil saving a life. They couldn't be more different and I love it!

Scott and Dean would NOT be friends. Ever. Lol This chapter made me so happy! Scott protecting Alan from possible danger is one of my favorite things to read. There was so much in this chapter that I loved, I don't know where to start. You have them all in character and I can actually see this happening. Amazing!

Holy hell, this was so awesome! I've been reading Thunderbird stories and somehow stumbled upon this gem; incredible first chapter! I didn't see much of the Winchester but I'm sure that will change in the upcoming chapters. Then, there's the Tracy's being worried about their baby...sweet! I love bro moments like this one so I absolutely loved this chapter!

DAMN THAT AFTER NOTE KILLED ME!

His headache is at Defcon Three," John snorted.

"He needs painkillers for the ribs and foot," Virgil raised a sceptical eyebrow.

"His throat is sore and his lungs are scratchy," Gordon added.

"And…if I'm not very much mistaken, I think his fever is spiking," Jeff added, grinning at Alan as he glared.

"You're all ganging up on me," he muttered irritably. They knew just by looking. How did they do that?

PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC

SCOTT AND DEAN
AND JEFF AND JOHN W
AND SAM AND ALAN
AND...HOLY SHIT DUDE THAT'S INCREDIBLE
I just love the parallels...especially the card/GPS thing, that was golden
Plus the whole hings with Alan believing you can only be yourself sort of answering Sams issue earlier about how he tried to just be himself rather than the person his dad wanted him to be but that was more complicated than it seemed
Especially with the overworking himself going on in the background. It's all pure genius and I love every word

Sleep…sleep would be nice. No more weird dreams and feelings…

…bad feelings…

It started with a bad feeling.

OOOOH THAT'S META AS FUCK

THEY'RE EFFING PSYCHIC AND I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THAT NO ATTENTION WAS DRAWN TO IT SO THE CHARACTERS DON'T KNOW BUT WE DO AND IT'S AMAZING

Ah the way the characters all met up made my heart melt even as I laughed my ass of in places despite being so tense
All in all I'm feeling very mixed feelings
The only thing I know for sure is that I love your characterisations, your OCs, and pretty much everything else about this fic
Seriously, this should spectacular