Words cannot describe the amount detail and care that was so carefully put together in order to create this, albeit, morbid and sad alternate ending. From the diary paragraph, I fell in love with the author and their writing style. In order to make a person feel as if they are living that story as their own in not just one, but 2 points of view are utterly amazing. This is most probably the best, detailed and amazingly well-written FanFiction I’ve even had the joy to read. I loved the carefully placed detail and the use of literary elements. And I love the characters and how the author was able to provide a sense of being within the characters and myself, making the character and the reader one. Again, I’m taken aback at the extent to which the author goes in order to create a feeling within the book itself and the reader's mind. This was the first time a book, a fan-written one at that, has made me cry a number of up to 3 times. Thank you so much for blessing me with this wonderful creation. It is truly a masterpiece within itself. I sure hope that the author has chosen a career path In literature. Such talents should not go wasted.

Welp I totally fucking cried. What a masterpiece

Beautiful the last two pages made me cry.

Wah! I'm crying. Why would you do this to me? Why?! Ah, it was so beautiful.

Watt?! That's how it ends that sucks!

great history. Bad ending :/

I loved everything except the ending. Dx

Simply amazing. Sexy, intense, heartbreaking.

I loved it! The ending chapters made me cry! I loved how even though you put your own spin onto the tale of VEV that you captured the heart and souls of the characters!

V just seems a little bit ADD dont ya think

oh...my god. that was soooo sad! it was perfect though, i loved how you ended it. poor v :(

great job though, i thought you did really well. the only thing i didn't like was how emotional evey was at some points. it seemed over the top to me, but it's whatever, it was still awesome.

I am re-reading this story for a second time, and I have to tell you that your ending always seems to bring me to tears! I love how you thought outside of the box and used Evey as the sacrifice. Although it pains me to read chapter 21, I felt as if it should have ended that way. Also, I applaud your character development.

So, ... she did just screw the dude right? How is that a favour to her? Did I miss something.. ?

Haha, all those idiot flamers, of course he would never kill her. Yay. I love this :D

loved it it's a twist